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Array ( [sid] => 26603 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Little Reflection [time] => 2003-11-06 21:51:40 [hometext] => I wrote this one 2 years ago.. feel free to comment on any of my poems Thanks [bodytext] => Little girl staring in the mirror
Tell me little one what do you see?

Little Eyes sparkling with stars
Do you like your reflection?
do you like what you see?

Little image staring back
melancholy in those sparkly eyes
as the little girl staring turns away
and hides

Little girl shifts her eyes toward
the mirror
looking back once again
staring at her face a tear drops
down her eye

Little girl why do you cry?

Little girl, your reflections telling you
something deep down inside

Little girl,
why hide your trueself from all
those who pass by

Little eyes
looking in the mirror one last time
before the little girl dies

the little girl replies I'm so ugly
so I want to die
I'm sick of hearing laughing, teasing and lies

Little girl lunges her little body
into the mirror

As the little girl lay dying, her eyes still
shining,
If only I wasn't so ugly to everyone
then I woudln't have had to die

***JENNI ***** EFFINITE [comments] => 3 [counter] => 241 [topic] => 48 [informant] => PhantomVampyress [notes] => (Edited for spelling) [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Little Reflection

Contributed by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 09:51:40 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Little girl staring in the mirror
Tell me little one what do you see?

Little Eyes sparkling with stars
Do you like your reflection?
do you like what you see?

Little image staring back
melancholy in those sparkly eyes
as the little girl staring turns away
and hides

Little girl shifts her eyes toward
the mirror
looking back once again
staring at her face a tear drops
down her eye

Little girl why do you cry?

Little girl, your reflections telling you
something deep down inside

Little girl,
why hide your trueself from all
those who pass by

Little eyes
looking in the mirror one last time
before the little girl dies

the little girl replies I'm so ugly
so I want to die
I'm sick of hearing laughing, teasing and lies

Little girl lunges her little body
into the mirror

As the little girl lay dying, her eyes still
shining,
If only I wasn't so ugly to everyone
then I woudln't have had to die

***JENNI ***** EFFINITE




Copyright © PhantomVampyress ... [ 2003-11-06 21:51:40]
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Re: Little Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by Shmily on Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 10:07:42 PM AEST
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This poem is so sad, and heartfelt...truely wonderful write though. Very emotional...

*K


Re: Little Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by Chanti on Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 10:14:00 PM AEST
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OoOo its so sad :*( Beautiful, but sad, and somewhat true...


Re: Little Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by kalika_vidya on Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 05:01:13 AM AEST
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This is a wonderful poem dear, you have great talent...K




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