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Array ( [sid] => 26512 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Smoke down this cigarette [time] => 2003-11-05 13:10:30 [hometext] => I wrote this before i started smoking .. My ex hated when i smoked so i smoked some more [bodytext] => As I put this cigarette to my
lips My mind drifts to you
I want to control my life (I think to myself)

As I put this cigarette to my lips
I think of us and how things were
It makes me sick , sick to my stomach
I smoke it down to the end
I'm sick to my stomach

As I put this cigarette to my lips
I don't want to do this but I'm
just so pissed
my thoughts are of you
I smoke it down to the very end
I don't want to do this
but I'm sick to my stomach

***JENNI E***** [comments] => 2 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 21 [informant] => PhantomVampyress [notes] => (Edited for spelling) [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Smoke down this cigarette

Contributed by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 01:10:30 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

As I put this cigarette to my
lips My mind drifts to you
I want to control my life (I think to myself)

As I put this cigarette to my lips
I think of us and how things were
It makes me sick , sick to my stomach
I smoke it down to the end
I'm sick to my stomach

As I put this cigarette to my lips
I don't want to do this but I'm
just so pissed
my thoughts are of you
I smoke it down to the very end
I don't want to do this
but I'm sick to my stomach

***JENNI E*****

Copyright © PhantomVampyress ... [ 2003-11-05 13:10:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Smoke down this cigarette (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 10:34:36 AM AEST
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sMOKE SMOKE THAT CIGRETT.
I am a smoker and am ***** because our goverment is trying to save me from myself. I don't think they belong in the health business-------but then there not--their in the business of gettin more of our money.
I found your poem humerous.

Sinned

Re: Smoke down this cigarette (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 03:34:13 PM AEST
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Good for you, you won't beleive this i'm smoking right now lol i smoke cigars. my wife smokes like a chimminy lol. but i don't care i love her anyways. and this is a cool poem, sometime's one has to do what's best for the nerves. and i fiind smoking enjoyable. it's my prozac lol. great write as usual . . .

Ben the artist formerly known as myheartsvoice lol . . .

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