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Array ( [sid] => 26510 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Relax [time] => 2003-11-05 12:59:23 [hometext] => This poem was typed with no intention of being balanced or correct - it was written with the intention of saying something and never having to take it back - no erasing. Its about the permanance of stating what my situation is without dressing it up. [bodytext] => Just Relax,
It seems so hard to do so,
when you see yourself heading no where,
when you have more time on your
hands that you can't addapt.
I've lost my future, for what I hope
is a short while.

Just relax,
Because everything wants to
work itself out,
But I am in dire need of seeing
some sort of light.
The light that has seemingly shined
so very dim in my eyes.
I've lost my faith, for what I hope
is a short while.

Just relax,
Because what I have to grab
onto is within,
My inner glow and my inner desires
will definently overcome these
shadows.
I've lost my concerns, for what I
hope is a long while.

Just relax,
No one understands that life
is as long as I think it is.
Theres plenty of time, and I want
to live a day at a time.
Its the only way to get back on track.
I've lost the map, and I'm
proud that I can find my way back
for what i hope is a long while.

Just relax,
Because, its so routine of such matters,
that my mind must daily strangle.
The aging gears have
yet to grind and sqeek, but I know
there will come a day when
this routine will just not work anymore.
I've lost concern of this persistant
and routine fall, for what I hope is a short while.

Just relax,
For there are plenty of drugs
to tide me over untill I figuire out what I want.
They open doors that I feel
have forever been unlocked, to tweek
my mind I find refuge - in experiancing
what noone else could ever describe.
I've lost my willpower to deny drugs,
because I find no other source of refuge,
for what i hope is a short while.

Just relax,
That girl of my dreams is around the corner
and I've accepted how much love can hurt.
Putting my heart on the line again, seems
so easy after what I've been through.
I fear no rejection, but only seek satisfaction
even for a short while.
I've lost all respect for having
my heart broken, for what I hope is forever.

Just relax,
Im happy with whats going on,
although I know I shouldn't be.
But what matters is exactly
what is happening.
Money means nothing to me,
only happiness, so I halt my future
to preserve my concience, and in
that I find my happieness.
I've lost my mind.

Just Relax. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 237 [topic] => 48 [informant] => spiffyphil [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Relax

Contributed by spiffyphil on Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 12:59:23 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Just Relax,
It seems so hard to do so,
when you see yourself heading no where,
when you have more time on your
hands that you can't addapt.
I've lost my future, for what I hope
is a short while.

Just relax,
Because everything wants to
work itself out,
But I am in dire need of seeing
some sort of light.
The light that has seemingly shined
so very dim in my eyes.
I've lost my faith, for what I hope
is a short while.

Just relax,
Because what I have to grab
onto is within,
My inner glow and my inner desires
will definently overcome these
shadows.
I've lost my concerns, for what I
hope is a long while.

Just relax,
No one understands that life
is as long as I think it is.
Theres plenty of time, and I want
to live a day at a time.
Its the only way to get back on track.
I've lost the map, and I'm
proud that I can find my way back
for what i hope is a long while.

Just relax,
Because, its so routine of such matters,
that my mind must daily strangle.
The aging gears have
yet to grind and sqeek, but I know
there will come a day when
this routine will just not work anymore.
I've lost concern of this persistant
and routine fall, for what I hope is a short while.

Just relax,
For there are plenty of drugs
to tide me over untill I figuire out what I want.
They open doors that I feel
have forever been unlocked, to tweek
my mind I find refuge - in experiancing
what noone else could ever describe.
I've lost my willpower to deny drugs,
because I find no other source of refuge,
for what i hope is a short while.

Just relax,
That girl of my dreams is around the corner
and I've accepted how much love can hurt.
Putting my heart on the line again, seems
so easy after what I've been through.
I fear no rejection, but only seek satisfaction
even for a short while.
I've lost all respect for having
my heart broken, for what I hope is forever.

Just relax,
Im happy with whats going on,
although I know I shouldn't be.
But what matters is exactly
what is happening.
Money means nothing to me,
only happiness, so I halt my future
to preserve my concience, and in
that I find my happieness.
I've lost my mind.

Just Relax.




Copyright © spiffyphil ... [ 2003-11-05 12:59:23]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Relax (User Rating: 1 )
by Manicmuze on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 02:33:35 PM AEST
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I like this, its real... its honest and it speaks about how desperate we are to find that light in the darkness... as "3doors down" would say "maybe i'm just blind"...

A strong vulnerable piece of writing, i enjoyed reading this one,
Thanks,
~ Wendy




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