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Goodbye
Contributed by
michelled43
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Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 06:30:40 PM in AEST
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With all these feelings inside
I don't know what I can do
All I can seem to think of
is how to get rid of you
Everytime I turn around
you seem to be right there
I don't want to be with you
but you don't seem to care
We shared our times together
the good times and the bad
I know you don't understand me
you think good is all we had
You have serious issues
you know that this is true
Maybe you just don't know how to fix
the bad things that you do
The relationship we had went good
I know you don't think I can last
You don't see me crying right?
I have put you in my past
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michelled43
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2003-11-04 18:30:40]
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Re: Goodbye
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 06:58:17 PM AEST
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Say goodbye to the pain in your life..... that's exactly it.....
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Re: Goodbye
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by Shmily on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 09:25:24 PM AEST
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Very heartfelt poem...wonderful write! :)
*K |
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Re: Goodbye
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by Peg on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 09:34:26 PM AEST
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| Right on, put this guy in your past for good! Move on something better is just around the corner. |
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Re: Goodbye
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 12:43:37 AM AEST
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| Woot way to go. I liked the poem very much. For sure though I agree find someone better. |
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Re: Goodbye
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by LovingWhispers on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 08:17:15 AM AEST
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I'm very proud of your strength.Always be true to yourself and never settle..never settle for what does not fulfill you,heart and soul.
Terrific piece.
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Re: Goodbye
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by katzie on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 06:38:08 PM AEST
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| heh i can see the kind of person you're talking about... following you around and such. hehe good job. |
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Re: Goodbye
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by NoangelNohope on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 07:15:32 PM AEST
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| now if only I could find the courage to put someone in my past as well...*sigh* |
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Re: Goodbye
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 12:13:47 PM AEST
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Emotional torture is the worst
well done |
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