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Array ( [sid] => 26382 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => not sure of life [time] => 2003-11-03 21:41:49 [hometext] => I am just sittin here, and this started flowin, so here is my first free flow poem...all my other work I go and edit it...not this time... [bodytext] => empty dreams
empty soul
empty heart
empty conscience
empty life
empty eyes

but still I devour the pain
even now, with the tears
streaming down my face
i need more pain
to make me feel alive
to make me real
i'll hurt myself, just for the hurt
just to know if I am really here
i never seem to know if it is just
a dream
or if it is real
i would hate to know it was real
i want more for my life,
so i hurt myself
over and over and over
create my own drama
just to feel alive
just to feel the pain
of living, of being real... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 32 [informant] => jacquelynne [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

not sure of life

Contributed by jacquelynne on Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 09:41:49 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

empty dreams
empty soul
empty heart
empty conscience
empty life
empty eyes

but still I devour the pain
even now, with the tears
streaming down my face
i need more pain
to make me feel alive
to make me real
i'll hurt myself, just for the hurt
just to know if I am really here
i never seem to know if it is just
a dream
or if it is real
i would hate to know it was real
i want more for my life,
so i hurt myself
over and over and over
create my own drama
just to feel alive
just to feel the pain
of living, of being real...

Copyright © jacquelynne ... [ 2003-11-03 21:41:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: not sure of life (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 01:01:44 AM AEST
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Awwww there there...it's okay...a good free flowing poem... :)

Emma.

Re: not sure of life (User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 07:25:36 AM AEST
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i think you should do more free flowing poem i hope one day they get happier tho

Re: not sure of life (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 11:18:45 PM AEST
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Hi jen. This is stefon, I actually got a chance to surf around on the internet for a while and I remembered about this place. I'm not sure if this is your latest poem or not (I figured it was cause it was on top... duh) I was looking at some of dustins poems and I saw your comments so I thought I would check out your poetry. Although i'm not the best judge of all these emotional touchy feely things I will say that I like this. I'm more drawn towards violence and death but this sort of draws out a morbid curiosity in me. I'm not sure why but I better not investigate this curiosity any further because if I do I might just turn into one of these little condom suckers all over this site (you and dustin excluded.) Hmmmmmm. I like.

Re: not sure of life (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 11:45:02 PM AEST
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LOL to Stefon's comment. Good work.

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