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like spoiled milk
to be thrown out

tossing you
out like smelly garbage
I go about my life
as if you were never in it

the plans i have and the choices
I am going to make
don't include you [comments] => 4 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 48 [informant] => PhantomVampyress [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Not You

Contributed by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 11:49:15 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Curdled trust
like spoiled milk
to be thrown out

tossing you
out like smelly garbage
I go about my life
as if you were never in it

the plans i have and the choices
I am going to make
don't include you

Copyright © PhantomVampyress ... [ 2003-11-02 23:49:15]
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Re: Not You (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 02:09:08 PM AEST
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I THOUGHT THIS WAS GOOD. YOU HAVE A GREAT TALENT IT SHOWS . KEEP ON WORKING ON THESE POEMS I AM SURE YOU HAVE MANY MORE TO SHARE ILIKE YOUR WRITING

Re: Not You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 12:01:39 AM AEST
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i can really feel the emotion in this poem! Great Job!

Re: Not You (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 03:07:15 AM AEST
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Wow, i feel for who ever is on the recieving end of this poem. Upfront and sincere no in between the lines with this one. great write.

Ben

Re: Not You (User Rating: 1 )
by fadingaway on Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 06:14:24 PM AEST
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This write holds pain. It's very blunt stating exactly the fact.

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