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Array ( [sid] => 26331 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => All I Need [time] => 2003-11-02 23:10:48 [hometext] => For some, there's that one someone who makes you whole [bodytext] => I’d give up my all
As long as you won’t go
'Cause without you, I am nothing

I know for sure I’d fall
And then search for you
'Cause without you, what am I?

Though life was always unfair
No one seemed to care
So I looked to you
For you’re the only one there

And hopefully you’ll see
What you mean to me
'Cause you mean a lot
More than I thought it could be

I’d give up my all
As long as you won’t go
'Cause without you, I am nothing

I know for sure I’d fall
And then search for you
'Cause without you, what am I?

I mind as well die
For without you, I
Am a wingless bird
Wanting to fly

And none of this you know
So now I’m letting it show
'Cause my worst fear
Is watching you go

I’d give up my all
As long as you won’t go
'Cause without you, I am nothing

I know for sure I’d fall
And then search for you
'Cause without you, what am I?

Am I worth your time?
At least a second of your day
'Cause I can’t bare to watch you
Completely go away

I’m sure that if you took the time
To hear my story out
You’d realize why I feel this way
And what we are all about

'Cause I know we’re meant to be together
There’s not a doubt in my heart
You are all I need to be whole
I can’t be complete if we’re apart [comments] => 1 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Schnikes13 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

All I Need

Contributed by Schnikes13 on Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 11:10:48 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I’d give up my all
As long as you won’t go
'Cause without you, I am nothing

I know for sure I’d fall
And then search for you
'Cause without you, what am I?

Though life was always unfair
No one seemed to care
So I looked to you
For you’re the only one there

And hopefully you’ll see
What you mean to me
'Cause you mean a lot
More than I thought it could be

I’d give up my all
As long as you won’t go
'Cause without you, I am nothing

I know for sure I’d fall
And then search for you
'Cause without you, what am I?

I mind as well die
For without you, I
Am a wingless bird
Wanting to fly

And none of this you know
So now I’m letting it show
'Cause my worst fear
Is watching you go

I’d give up my all
As long as you won’t go
'Cause without you, I am nothing

I know for sure I’d fall
And then search for you
'Cause without you, what am I?

Am I worth your time?
At least a second of your day
'Cause I can’t bare to watch you
Completely go away

I’m sure that if you took the time
To hear my story out
You’d realize why I feel this way
And what we are all about

'Cause I know we’re meant to be together
There’s not a doubt in my heart
You are all I need to be whole
I can’t be complete if we’re apart

Copyright Â© Schnikes13 ... [ 2003-11-02 23:10:48]
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Re: All I Need (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 11:55:00 PM AEST
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I really liked your poem very nicely put good job

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