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Array ( [sid] => 26252 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Angel [time] => 2003-11-02 00:26:30 [hometext] => I had been on the reservation when this occured [bodytext] => She was just turning five,
able to read and write.

Had a smile that would
brighten each day.

She would bring him story books,
he never had time to look,
she smiled softly and said its alright.

Time at hand know,
time to see know,
there was an angel right by his side.

One day will change all things,
this day her life came to an to end...

words of a father as I held her close.

Never thought i`d walk with an angel
talk with an angel,
wipe the tears, from an angel`s eyes.

Never thought an angel would love me,
and as I held her close,
she smiled softly and said its alright.
I heard an angel whisper good-by......Crow

[comments] => 7 [counter] => 201 [topic] => 31 [informant] => Crow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )
The Angel

Contributed by Crow on Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 12:26:30 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



She was just turning five,
able to read and write.

Had a smile that would
brighten each day.

She would bring him story books,
he never had time to look,
she smiled softly and said its alright.

Time at hand know,
time to see know,
there was an angel right by his side.

One day will change all things,
this day her life came to an to end...

words of a father as I held her close.

Never thought i`d walk with an angel
talk with an angel,
wipe the tears, from an angel`s eyes.

Never thought an angel would love me,
and as I held her close,
she smiled softly and said its alright.
I heard an angel whisper good-by......Crow





Copyright © Crow ... [ 2003-11-02 00:26:30]
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Re: The Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 12:36:58 AM AEST
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you have no idea how this touched me...
i heard an angel whisper good-bye..... yes!!!!


Re: The Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 12:49:39 AM AEST
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"Never thought an angel would love me,
and as I held her close,
she smiled softly and said its alright.
I heard an angel whisper good-by......"

These lines held my hearts breath...
The whole write brings a tear yet there is a comfort in the way you have expressed this.
So sad...


Re: The Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 01:11:51 AM AEST
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Sigh.......
Jenni


Re: The Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 04:39:21 AM AEST
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Wow! I agree with everyone else. It's tottaly awesome and very moving!
peace, joy, luv,
emy


Re: The Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 06:43:54 AM AEST
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this is very inspiring tells me we should take the time for people.
kody


Re: The Angel (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 02:39:56 PM AEST
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thanks Kody, messed it up a little, but your right we should, about the only thing we can`t get back "time.


thank you all! for allowing a few mistakes.


Re: The Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 6th September 2008 @ 08:57:47 AM AEST
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Another sigh..... This time I'll add that this is truly heart-breaking... Life is so unfair.....
Hugs
Jenni




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