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Array ( [sid] => 26227 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You thought you had me fooled [time] => 2003-11-01 18:50:15 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Why?
Why did you have to be like that,
why can't you just me honest with me,
and tell the truth.
You're Just hurting me more when you lie.
You always thought that you had me fooled,
and I couldn't tell when you were lying,
but I could.
When you lied you always look away,
and couldn't look me in the eyes,
and paused for a second before you would speak,
like you were trying to come up with a good story to tell me.
But guess what I'm not going to put up with it anymore.
Goodbye, and nothing more is being said.
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You thought you had me fooled

Contributed by sugar0986 on Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 06:50:15 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

Why?
Why did you have to be like that,
why can't you just me honest with me,
and tell the truth.
You're Just hurting me more when you lie.
You always thought that you had me fooled,
and I couldn't tell when you were lying,
but I could.
When you lied you always look away,
and couldn't look me in the eyes,
and paused for a second before you would speak,
like you were trying to come up with a good story to tell me.
But guess what I'm not going to put up with it anymore.
Goodbye, and nothing more is being said.

Copyright © sugar0986 ... [ 2003-11-01 18:50:15]
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Re: You thought you had me fooled (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 09:55:33 PM AEST
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you go girl you did say it like it was

Re: You thought you had me fooled (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 04:14:35 AM AEST
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Yeah, thats why I try not to lie. I suck at it. I always pause and can't look a person in the eyes. Unless I am lying when I'm angry then I can... I hated that about myself. So in effect I loved this one. I hate the ones that can look you straight in the eyes though and lie... I swear they have no conscious.

Re: You thought you had me fooled (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 05:22:50 PM AEST
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Why do people lie? I just don't get it..... Why? Really, don't they realize how much it hurts others?
Well power to ya when you cut out the snakes in your life. We may think we need them, but we're better off without the pain.

Great write,
Jelly

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