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Waters of crystal clear proportions
Clouded by memories soon to be lost
Tranquility but a hearts whisper near
This poem i write from the heavens my dear

Light so bright within a shadow
Gleaming within a dearkened soul
Its brightness only met by its beauty
Spread across so many lives
In its prism soothing alone

My eternal sleep is inevitable
Forever an eternity, in a finite world
But death has so far to come
Entwined deep within, my essence complete
A story of love, of passion, a story of deceit

Raindrops fall like stars from your heart
Each one a different story, burning so bright
The truth is a whisper deep within all
Remember were all ghosts of memories
Trapped in a river of time

....i am so lost [comments] => 3 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 48 [informant] => forever_lonely [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Raindrops stars in a river of time

Contributed by forever_lonely on Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 08:11:19 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Flowing through rivers of time
Waters of crystal clear proportions
Clouded by memories soon to be lost
Tranquility but a hearts whisper near
This poem i write from the heavens my dear

Light so bright within a shadow
Gleaming within a dearkened soul
Its brightness only met by its beauty
Spread across so many lives
In its prism soothing alone

My eternal sleep is inevitable
Forever an eternity, in a finite world
But death has so far to come
Entwined deep within, my essence complete
A story of love, of passion, a story of deceit

Raindrops fall like stars from your heart
Each one a different story, burning so bright
The truth is a whisper deep within all
Remember were all ghosts of memories
Trapped in a river of time

....i am so lost

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Re: Raindrops stars in a river of time (User Rating: 1 )
by norticus on Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 10:18:46 AM AEST
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This was real cool. I like the tempo and the use of the word dearkened. I give this a 3.7 on the Nortiscale.

Re: Raindrops stars in a river of time (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 10:27:56 AM AEST
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I love this... especially the last stanza... very creative. :)

Re: Raindrops stars in a river of time (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 06:41:03 PM AEST
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Geezz the more i read from your poems the more I get the feeling that you are a great poet!! WoW!!!!!!! Amazing!!
Anne :D

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