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Array ( [sid] => 26194 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A little girl's Question [time] => 2003-11-01 06:42:28 [hometext] => * * * [bodytext] => You’re the rising sun
To the blooming face of mother nature
You’re the delightful moon
To the eyes of your blessed devotees
You’re the receptacle of mercy
To your children who pray with love
You are the essence of sacred word
And the final refuge to all beings
In your tranquil face of love
None can see either anger or sorrow
What is the goal of your creation?
Why do you make us laugh and weep
When we pray with our pure hearts
Why do you fail to fill our lives
With honey of eternal bliss……
Why do you allow theses devils
who wander within the four walls
of your dwelling place and
spoil the beauty of life on earth?

,

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A little girl's Question

Contributed by kalika_vidya on Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 06:42:28 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

You’re the rising sun
To the blooming face of mother nature
You’re the delightful moon
To the eyes of your blessed devotees
You’re the receptacle of mercy
To your children who pray with love
You are the essence of sacred word
And the final refuge to all beings
In your tranquil face of love
None can see either anger or sorrow
What is the goal of your creation?
Why do you make us laugh and weep
When we pray with our pure hearts
Why do you fail to fill our lives
With honey of eternal bliss……
Why do you allow theses devils
who wander within the four walls
of your dwelling place and
spoil the beauty of life on earth?

,

Copyright Â© kalika_vidya ... [ 2003-11-01 06:42:28]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A little girl's Question (User Rating: 1 )
by Glo on Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 08:23:53 AM AEST
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I enjoyed reading this very much. A very bright and intelligent little girl I might add. Children see and understand more than we know. There's also adults finding themselves asking the same questions.

My personal opinion is that it would lead to ones own religious beliefs. Of which there are many, therefore having many different answers. But looking through the eyes of a child, I could see her asking and looking for honest answers with much sincerity. Children deserve to be happy and carefree every day of their lives. Very well written, something to be learned here. Thank you.

Glo!

Re: A little girl's Question (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 12:33:32 AM AEST
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Awww...it is a good question..welldone

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