Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 13:54:50 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 26170 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Can't Have Your love [time] => 2003-10-31 20:08:31 [hometext] => it has a stupid title i know it does, but i cant think of anything good for it really. well this is a rhyming one, i like it a lot (since I've finally gotten half way decent at it) and I hope you'll like it too. thanks for reading [bodytext] => When I take a trip to your house,
I get filled with all kinds of feelings
Though they don't mean a thing to you,
I just can not stop my believing
It's understood that you never could,
be in love with this human being

My soul gets warm when I see your eyes,
but then my body gets all freezing
When I heard you can't love me,
I felt something in me missing
Well all I do is dream of you,
and the love I won't be kissing [comments] => 4 [counter] => 252 [topic] => 43 [informant] => stalkee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Can't Have Your love

Contributed by stalkee on Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 08:08:31 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

When I take a trip to your house,
I get filled with all kinds of feelings
Though they don't mean a thing to you,
I just can not stop my believing
It's understood that you never could,
be in love with this human being

My soul gets warm when I see your eyes,
but then my body gets all freezing
When I heard you can't love me,
I felt something in me missing
Well all I do is dream of you,
and the love I won't be kissing

Copyright © stalkee ... [ 2003-10-31 20:08:31]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Can't Have Your love (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 08:11:29 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I like this but did you ever think something might be wrong with them?

Re: Can't Have Your love (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 09:06:41 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

"Well all I do is dream of you,
and the love I won't be kissing"

This is soooo lovely.
It must hurt you deeply.

Re: Can't Have Your love (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenheartedfool on Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 10:09:52 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Good write, Keep up the good work

Re: Can't Have Your love (User Rating: 1 )
by Nomie on Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 02:42:52 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

this is my exact situation right this very moment! and i feel as though i'm dieing inside because of it.
when the person u love the most, tells u after so long that it was all a lie and they felt nothing even when they told it to u so meaningfully! feels unbeleivable to me...

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com