Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 12:52:42 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 26165 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Mask [time] => 2003-10-31 18:55:43 [hometext] => 'This poem came from a desire to tell people that appearances can be deceiving, and people aren't always what they seem'. [bodytext] =>
I don't show myself to the world,
for I don't like who i am.
The mask I wear
covers the real me.
Sometimes I forget I'm wearing it,
and i let my real self show.
The mask I wear
is of pride and stubborness,
to hide my weakness.
It hides how I really feel.
People fall for my false front
and never meet the real me.
They believe my mask
and don't look deeper.
They believe I'm exactly what they see,
and what they see is only a mask.
Underneath this mask
Is a happy, joyful young woman.
Who only hides from you
'cause she's too emotional underneath,
and thinks you'd laugh
if you understood how deeply she cares.
'Cause she doesn't know how to explain
what is happening to her,
this joyful young woman is me.
And I'm so very shy and confused
'cause I don't know what to say
so I wear the mask to shut it all away.
I'm good at hiding beneath my mask
'cause I've had practice over the years.
Now I'm afraid to let it show,
afraid to let it out that I'm growing up
and i have feelings.
I'm afraid to take off my mask,
it's almost a part of me now,
but I have to take it off,I must
'cause masks are useless.
They just put off getting to know someone.
All I wish is for him to care,
'cause I want to remove my mask.
And if he cares enough, I will.
So he'd better get prepared
'cause the real me is coming out,
after several years of being hidden.
So watch out world, here I come
my mask is being lifted permanently. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Hannah_jeannie_Brazeau [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
The Mask

Contributed by Hannah_jeannie_Brazeau on Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 06:55:43 PM in AEST
Topic: oops




I don't show myself to the world,
for I don't like who i am.
The mask I wear
covers the real me.
Sometimes I forget I'm wearing it,
and i let my real self show.
The mask I wear
is of pride and stubborness,
to hide my weakness.
It hides how I really feel.
People fall for my false front
and never meet the real me.
They believe my mask
and don't look deeper.
They believe I'm exactly what they see,
and what they see is only a mask.
Underneath this mask
Is a happy, joyful young woman.
Who only hides from you
'cause she's too emotional underneath,
and thinks you'd laugh
if you understood how deeply she cares.
'Cause she doesn't know how to explain
what is happening to her,
this joyful young woman is me.
And I'm so very shy and confused
'cause I don't know what to say
so I wear the mask to shut it all away.
I'm good at hiding beneath my mask
'cause I've had practice over the years.
Now I'm afraid to let it show,
afraid to let it out that I'm growing up
and i have feelings.
I'm afraid to take off my mask,
it's almost a part of me now,
but I have to take it off,I must
'cause masks are useless.
They just put off getting to know someone.
All I wish is for him to care,
'cause I want to remove my mask.
And if he cares enough, I will.
So he'd better get prepared
'cause the real me is coming out,
after several years of being hidden.
So watch out world, here I come
my mask is being lifted permanently.




Copyright © Hannah_jeannie_Brazeau ... [ 2003-10-31 18:55:43]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: The Mask (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 06:59:47 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I can fully relate and had done the same for nine years now. I think this was beautifuly written. I hope things work and wish you the best.


Re: The Mask (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 07:09:09 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Very beautifull, strong, write!!!!!
We all need 2 be reminded from time to time.
It's so much easier 2 hide! it takes courage 2 let down our masks!
peace, joy, luv, strength,
emy


Re: The Mask (User Rating: 1 )
by Shmily on Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 10:00:41 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
This was a beautiful poem! I can relate to this so much. I wish you well, keep writing!

*K




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com