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Array ( [sid] => 26130 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => SAVE OUR CHILDREN [time] => 2003-10-31 05:39:09 [hometext] => This was written in the 80's but still very prevalent today?????? [bodytext] => Out on the street
no place to lay their heads.
No luv to warm them
not even a pillow or bed!
Can't stay at home
for the things we do.
Whats happened to
togetherness, Mommy,
Daddy and you?

Bless our children
start a new race!
Give them luv
put smiles on their faces.
Bless our children
that live in the street!
Bless our children
All yours, unique!

Please father we pray
turn them into luv!
Let's show your touch,
peace, protection from
above.
It's a mess this place
sin, shame, you know.
Teach them a better way.
Give us love to grow.

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 8 [informant] => emystar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AmericanTragedy )
SAVE OUR CHILDREN

Contributed by emystar on Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 05:39:09 AM in AEST
Topic: AmericanTragedy



Out on the street
no place to lay their heads.
No luv to warm them
not even a pillow or bed!
Can't stay at home
for the things we do.
Whats happened to
togetherness, Mommy,
Daddy and you?

Bless our children
start a new race!
Give them luv
put smiles on their faces.
Bless our children
that live in the street!
Bless our children
All yours, unique!

Please father we pray
turn them into luv!
Let's show your touch,
peace, protection from
above.
It's a mess this place
sin, shame, you know.
Teach them a better way.
Give us love to grow.





Copyright © emystar ... [ 2003-10-31 05:39:09]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: SAVE OUR CHILDREN (User Rating: 1 )
by kalika_vidya on Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 05:55:13 AM AEST
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really a heart touching poem..I pray for those children..K


Re: SAVE OUR CHILDREN (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 06:30:25 AM AEST
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Now THIS is what I like to see..a beautiful heart and caring soul..Bless you hun.This is a touching write.Even to take time out to think and write about them is just wonderful and shows how selfless you are. *smiles and (((hugs)))


Re: SAVE OUR CHILDREN (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 07:29:57 PM AEST
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very good write, great thought to pass on. Crow


Re: SAVE OUR CHILDREN (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 01:39:50 AM AEST
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Emy...this is so very special.... great reminder to ppl.....
Hugs,
Jenni


Re: SAVE OUR CHILDREN (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 05:29:26 PM AEST
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Lots of truth found in your poem. I was absolutely delighted to read it. Great poem.

Kie




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