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Array ( [sid] => 26117 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => without You I'm nothing at all [time] => 2003-10-30 21:54:01 [hometext] => i guess this title works for this poem, I dont know...I dont even know if this makes ANY sense at all...to me it does, because i wrote it but oh well....even if it doesnt, maybe youll still like it...ha...thanks for reading [bodytext] => Feeling all my tears inside me,
but they can't come out
I try to hide all of my pain,
behind my smile
I'm a little broken hearted once again,
but what else could have happened? It is me afterall
Although I'm feeling so alone now,
it feels good to know that I'm not,
cause He is on top of the world,
seeing what I'm doing, what I'm going through

So far through these past few months,
it seems I've found nothing at all
I just want my life to slow down a little,
please Lord, slow it down
I know lately I've gone away from You
But I realise that with out You on my mind,
I'm always tripping on nothing,
and something has totally been missing
Now it's perfectly clear in my head,
that without You I'm nothing at all [comments] => 5 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 11 [informant] => stalkee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )

without You I'm nothing at all

Contributed by stalkee on Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 09:54:01 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

Feeling all my tears inside me,
but they can't come out
I try to hide all of my pain,
behind my smile
I'm a little broken hearted once again,
but what else could have happened? It is me afterall
Although I'm feeling so alone now,
it feels good to know that I'm not,
cause He is on top of the world,
seeing what I'm doing, what I'm going through

So far through these past few months,
it seems I've found nothing at all
I just want my life to slow down a little,
please Lord, slow it down
I know lately I've gone away from You
But I realise that with out You on my mind,
I'm always tripping on nothing,
and something has totally been missing
Now it's perfectly clear in my head,
that without You I'm nothing at all

Copyright © stalkee ... [ 2003-10-30 21:54:01]
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Re: without You I'm nothing at all (User Rating: 1 )
by Schnikes13 on Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 09:57:15 PM AEST
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This makes sense, to me at least.

Beautiful write! I could totally "get" your emotions!

Re: without You I'm nothing at all (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 10:27:19 PM AEST
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A song the lord gave me.....
If only I let him be there.....

HE said he would take care of everything for me
if only i will let him be
the only thing i need to do
is praise him through and through
cause he wants to do everything for me....

chorus.
REACH out and touch him now and then
reach out and let him take your hand
he will show you the way
he has a wonderful plan
so he can walk you through gods promise land...

He wants to talk to everyone
He wants them to know
THAT he is the only one
but not everyone knows..
everyone dont listen
and no one seems to care
he just wants everyone to know
that he is right there.....chorus again...

if only you will listen
if only you will care
if only you will know
that jesus will be there
dont throw all your cares away
just let god know when you pray
cause god will always be there.....

(I have you know that I have never commented using one of my songs...in fact i was typing a song to you and it wasnt comeing out right and i asked him why and i knew that it wasnt ment for you...but then this one came and it flowed...so know that you know..that YES HE KNOWS IT ALL and he will be there for you..just ask him to help and he will be there ..seek him more you will get more...cant do downt he street with no gas in the car....so get filled up again.....
Oh...HE LOVES YOU...you know that but I know that I know he really wants you to know.....sandy

Re: without You I'm nothing at all (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 10:34:48 PM AEST
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Really good write...thanks for sharing..
Jenni

Re: without You I'm nothing at all (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 11:16:28 PM AEST
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i can relate

Re: without You I'm nothing at all (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 07:31:58 AM AEST
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I had a similar realization lately... I can relate.
Beautiful write you've got here.

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