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Contributed by deathwriter on Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 05:24:11 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Tomorrow's the day of the dead and only if I went through with killing myself they would be remembering me and all of what I used to be like.

Copyright © deathwriter ... [ 2003-10-30 17:24:11]
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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 10:33:56 PM AEST
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I love you
he loves you
no matter what you say or do
we will always love you................

I wish I could say something
to make you feel so good
I wish I could give you a hug
I really wish I could

I wish I could say something
to make you smile again
and tell you that HE REALLY WANTS TO HOLD YOUR HAND...

Only if you let him
Only if you dare
Only if you realize
that he would be right there...

I wish that you would let him
If only you would try
that no matter what
he is really by yourside...

NEVER wanting you to hurt yourself
Never wanting you to give up
but asking him in your life
so he can pick you up....
and put you on his knee
and love you like a daughter
like he wants you to be.....

HE LOVES YOU
AND I LOVE YOU
SO DONT GIVE UP....................please........

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