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Array ( [sid] => 2610 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Monopoly [time] => 2002-08-22 10:51:17 [hometext] => He took over every possible place in my heart that there was room for love, and left it so fast, that I never had a chance to get over him. He's with my good friend now, how am I supposed to deal with that? [bodytext] => You watched me take a fall
And you don't even care at all
You don't even realize
And the tears fill my eyes
My heart starts to pound
And the room spins around
I'm racking my brain
This whole ordeal is driving me insane
I'm going crazy without you
I'm told there's nothing I could do
I'm not finding this very easy
You won't even talk to me
And I wish I could see your face
But I'm giving you your space
In the last 48 hours, I've lost something great
I messed up hard, that I won't debate
I would get down on my hands and knees
I'm begging you, to listen to me please
I want to talk, to state my side
And whether I'm forgiven, you decide
I can't see that as something I would do
I liked you way too much to do that to you
There's no way to tell you just how I feel
This whole thing seems so unreal
One day I have you, the next you are gone
I miss you so much, though we didn't date long
It bothers me so much and I feel so bad
'Cause I lost one of the best things I ever had
I wish and wish I could go back to that night
And change it, and fix this, and make it alright
I'm sitting at home all night hoping you'll call me
And forgive and forget, it'd make me so happy
I'm stuck in this mess and I can't get out
And it's all my fault and that's all I can think about
I could never explain why I acted that way
Ask me why I did it but i have nothing to say
I've sat and thought, and asked myself why
But I can't give an answer and it drives me to cry
'Cause I had you, I liked you, got dumb and let you go
And it kills me because my motives I will never know
I don't know about you but I am in pain
And I'm worried you'll never want to see me again
You must be so mad, emabarassed, full of hatred
But I don't want to be the "ex-chick you never should have dated"
Please don't turn your back on me, on us, maybe being friends
'Cause I want you back so bad, I didn't really want it to end
If you think I meant for this to happen you are so wrong
And I like you too much, it'll be too hard to move on
'Cause the last couple of days, you're all that's been on my mind
And it's hard enough without you by my side
This is kind of like a game, we each get a turn
And all the way through, there's something to learn
Well I learned from my move, made a big mistake
So I guess I wanna know what move you're gonna make... [comments] => 1 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 22 [informant] => SeXyDrAgOn [notes] => [ihome] => 1 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Monopoly

Contributed by SeXyDrAgOn on Thursday, 22nd August 2002 @ 10:51:17 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



You watched me take a fall
And you don't even care at all
You don't even realize
And the tears fill my eyes
My heart starts to pound
And the room spins around
I'm racking my brain
This whole ordeal is driving me insane
I'm going crazy without you
I'm told there's nothing I could do
I'm not finding this very easy
You won't even talk to me
And I wish I could see your face
But I'm giving you your space
In the last 48 hours, I've lost something great
I messed up hard, that I won't debate
I would get down on my hands and knees
I'm begging you, to listen to me please
I want to talk, to state my side
And whether I'm forgiven, you decide
I can't see that as something I would do
I liked you way too much to do that to you
There's no way to tell you just how I feel
This whole thing seems so unreal
One day I have you, the next you are gone
I miss you so much, though we didn't date long
It bothers me so much and I feel so bad
'Cause I lost one of the best things I ever had
I wish and wish I could go back to that night
And change it, and fix this, and make it alright
I'm sitting at home all night hoping you'll call me
And forgive and forget, it'd make me so happy
I'm stuck in this mess and I can't get out
And it's all my fault and that's all I can think about
I could never explain why I acted that way
Ask me why I did it but i have nothing to say
I've sat and thought, and asked myself why
But I can't give an answer and it drives me to cry
'Cause I had you, I liked you, got dumb and let you go
And it kills me because my motives I will never know
I don't know about you but I am in pain
And I'm worried you'll never want to see me again
You must be so mad, emabarassed, full of hatred
But I don't want to be the "ex-chick you never should have dated"
Please don't turn your back on me, on us, maybe being friends
'Cause I want you back so bad, I didn't really want it to end
If you think I meant for this to happen you are so wrong
And I like you too much, it'll be too hard to move on
'Cause the last couple of days, you're all that's been on my mind
And it's hard enough without you by my side
This is kind of like a game, we each get a turn
And all the way through, there's something to learn
Well I learned from my move, made a big mistake
So I guess I wanna know what move you're gonna make...




Copyright © SeXyDrAgOn ... [ 2002-08-22 10:51:17]
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Re: Monopoly (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 11:52:48 AM AEST
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Reading this has brought a lot of bad memories for me. Its like you were writing my life.If only we could take it all back and start anew.
Great write




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