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Array ( [sid] => 26038 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Butchery [time] => 2003-10-29 15:54:13 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The ghoul has reached my coffin now he
smash the lid. All I see is darkness and
two shining eyes.
Crawling to the church
and in a stream of light I see my mutila-
ted remains gore instead of flesh. Rotten
and filled with maggots I search for
modern life I would die to see, my kids
and wife.
A scream break the silence , a
human being died. Shocked of this morbid
sight. Crawling in the night. I'm so near
my dying place, I can see my loved.
I open
the door and there she stands, I hear the
children scream.
I saw people die, as dead as I was.
The children puked then died,
love has turned to carrion. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 13 [informant] => cant-skate [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

The Butchery

Contributed by cant-skate on Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 03:54:13 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The ghoul has reached my coffin now he
smash the lid. All I see is darkness and
two shining eyes.
Crawling to the church
and in a stream of light I see my mutila-
ted remains gore instead of flesh. Rotten
and filled with maggots I search for
modern life I would die to see, my kids
and wife.
A scream break the silence , a
human being died. Shocked of this morbid
sight. Crawling in the night. I'm so near
my dying place, I can see my loved.
I open
the door and there she stands, I hear the
children scream.
I saw people die, as dead as I was.
The children puked then died,
love has turned to carrion.

Copyright © cant-skate ... [ 2003-10-29 15:54:13]
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Re: The Butchery (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 04:54:24 PM AEST
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i search for modern life i would die to see........... wow.........so creative......

Re: The Butchery (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 01:19:54 PM AEST
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this is definitely dark - i see many things in this poem - some ancient and some very much in the moment - horror, terror, death

very creative write

merry

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