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Array ( [sid] => 25978 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => All alone [time] => 2003-10-28 21:55:23 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Tonight I sit here all alone
This is how you want it to be
You said I deserve this time for myself
But how this could be, I just don’t see

The thoughts running rampant through my mind
The desire for you my body still feels
Why didn’t you want me tonight
I don’t want these thoughts that the night reveals

One left me all alone in favor of his stupid hobby
He would rather be outside freezing with a fishing pole in hand
Than here snuggled up next to me

The other said I deserve this free time
Never thought to ask if this is what I want
Somehow though this all feels like a lie to me

How is I get so close to what I truly want
I finally begin to realize my dreams are so near
Only to have fate drop a stone on my head
My trust is shattered once again, I fear
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All alone

Contributed by mercedes on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 09:55:23 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Tonight I sit here all alone
This is how you want it to be
You said I deserve this time for myself
But how this could be, I just don’t see

The thoughts running rampant through my mind
The desire for you my body still feels
Why didn’t you want me tonight
I don’t want these thoughts that the night reveals

One left me all alone in favor of his stupid hobby
He would rather be outside freezing with a fishing pole in hand
Than here snuggled up next to me

The other said I deserve this free time
Never thought to ask if this is what I want
Somehow though this all feels like a lie to me

How is I get so close to what I truly want
I finally begin to realize my dreams are so near
Only to have fate drop a stone on my head
My trust is shattered once again, I fear

Copyright © mercedes ... [ 2003-10-28 21:55:23]
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Re: All alone (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 10:00:44 PM AEST
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Very good writing and I know the feelings well!
peace, joy, luv,
emy
hang tuff!

Re: All alone (User Rating: 1 )
by hardcoreputa on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 11:20:04 PM AEST
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i feel the same way tonight... i constantly must keep myself busy to avoid hearing my voices too much. a great poem, very true for many others i'm sure ~Apryl

Re: All alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 12:07:27 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this one very much. I would honestly just find a way to be strong enough to be content within myself. Of course I always believe in fighting for what you believe in. You will find the right person soon. Just never give up hope for sometimes it is all you have.

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