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As you walk with your heart...
Stepping lightly through your tears
Release the sorrow that holds you close
Before your slumber nears

As you close your eyes...
Still your longing heart roams
A soft bed for passion and romance
Dreams that have no home

When sleep has come to take you...
A journey your soul takes
You must rest your sorrows by the road
For in dreams they can't escape

If tears should paint the dreams...
On a bed of sorrow and pain
Then only the darkest canvas
In the morning shall remain

Then when your day awakens...
Again,with longing heart
You will cradle sorrow
For every day you start

Don't let the sun catch you crying...
Rest your soul and heart and mind
Release yourself into the smiles
Of the little things you find

Search not for what you ache for
Be touched for what finds you
Don't let the sun catch you crying
Or the moon will catch you too

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Don't Let The Sun Catch You Crying....

Contributed by LovingWhispers on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 07:22:27 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

As you walk with your heart...
Stepping lightly through your tears
Release the sorrow that holds you close
Before your slumber nears

As you close your eyes...
Still your longing heart roams
A soft bed for passion and romance
Dreams that have no home

When sleep has come to take you...
A journey your soul takes
You must rest your sorrows by the road
For in dreams they can't escape

If tears should paint the dreams...
On a bed of sorrow and pain
Then only the darkest canvas
In the morning shall remain

Then when your day awakens...
Again,with longing heart
You will cradle sorrow
For every day you start

Don't let the sun catch you crying...
Rest your soul and heart and mind
Release yourself into the smiles
Of the little things you find

Search not for what you ache for
Be touched for what finds you
Don't let the sun catch you crying
Or the moon will catch you too

Copyright © LovingWhispers ... [ 2003-10-28 19:22:27]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Don't Let The Sun Catch You Crying.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Schnikes13 on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 07:33:11 PM AEST
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Very inspiring!

Beautifully written! Touching!

Re: Don't Let The Sun Catch You Crying.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 07:37:53 PM AEST
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wonderful
Shari

Re: Don't Let The Sun Catch You Crying.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 07:44:54 PM AEST
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Re: Don't Let The Sun Catch You Crying.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 08:04:02 PM AEST
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A masterpeice..... this is one of your very best ever in my humble opinion. Your talent never ceases to amaze me .

Roses

Re: Don't Let The Sun Catch You Crying.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 08:05:44 PM AEST
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i`m gona quit writing and just read! this is great. Crow

Re: Don't Let The Sun Catch You Crying.... (User Rating: 1 )
by PoeticReign on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 09:38:18 PM AEST
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this is so beautifully written. wonderful job! definitely inspiring to make me write...
~Nikki

Re: Don't Let The Sun Catch You Crying.... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 09:39:45 PM AEST
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Awesome!
Definently a masterpeice!
Supurb!
peace, joy, luv,
emy

Re: Don't Let The Sun Catch You Crying.... (User Rating: 1 )
by hardcoreputa on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 11:30:01 PM AEST
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wow... this completely touched me. your poetry(as always) is so wonderful i can't think of words to describe it. the flow of this poem alone was amazing. ~Apryl

Re: Don't Let The Sun Catch You Crying.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 11:52:00 PM AEST
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It is truly nice to see someone who is inspiring. You write with much hope for many things and people. Probably the exact opposite of mine at times. Mine is mine for what it is. But yours is absolutely wonderful.

Re: Don't Let The Sun Catch You Crying.... (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 03:25:28 AM AEST
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Totally beautiful write ... lifted my spirits today ... thank you .. Jan

Re: Don't Let The Sun Catch You Crying.... (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 12:58:10 AM AEST
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I totally felt the pain and longing the poem radiated. Well done.

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