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Array ( [sid] => 25955 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => RiP mommy [time] => 2003-10-28 15:54:48 [hometext] => R.I.P mom [bodytext] => Mommy mommy
why'd you die
you left me alone,
alone to cry

Mommy mommy
I really miss you
I miss your smile
I miss everything
that you used to do

Mommy mommy
nothings the same
but i guess I know
who is to blame
maybe if i was good
and if i was nice
then i would still have
you in my life.. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 32 [informant] => XoXextremesk8ergrlXoX [notes] => (Approved by Mod_1) [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

RiP mommy

Contributed by XoXextremesk8ergrlXoX on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 03:54:48 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Mommy mommy
why'd you die
you left me alone,
alone to cry

Mommy mommy
I really miss you
I miss your smile
I miss everything
that you used to do

Mommy mommy
nothings the same
but i guess I know
who is to blame
maybe if i was good
and if i was nice
then i would still have
you in my life..

Copyright © XoXextremesk8ergrlXoX ... [ 2003-10-28 15:54:48]
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Re: RiP mommy (User Rating: 1 )
by sugar0986 on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 07:59:37 PM AEST
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oh my this is really sad.

Re: RiP mommy (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 10:08:41 PM AEST
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Ouch!! Children need to be made aware that they are not responsble for stuff like this....
This was awesome...
Jenni

Re: RiP mommy (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 02:15:19 PM AEST
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even if the child never verbally expresses the guilt....they should be told it is in no way their fault.........such a sad sad write......

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