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Array ( [sid] => 25917 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Suicide spells FREEDOM [time] => 2003-10-27 23:19:49 [hometext] => *I've failed again... pretty much self-explanatory* [bodytext] => I can smell the pain
Which burns in my heart, unquenchable
Suicide spells FREEDOM!
I'm afraid, but I must do this
Forgive me oh God for I know not what I do

I cut deep and with blood
Flows freedom, a freedom
I haven't tasted in months
I must NOT be afraid
I know I've failed, but I can't help it

I see the cuts outlined in blood
Tasting my twisted fantasies
And the pain which I birthed
I wish I could end all this *****
I'm crying like a pregnant 'virgin'
Holding the razor in my dilapidated hands

Feeling this pain cut ever so deep
I never thought I could feel this much
Fear tingles up my spine
As the blood continues to flow
I still stand tall, "Suicide spells FREEDOM!"

Read the story on my skin
You may be able to decipher
I'm feeling the coldness
It caresses my bones
And screams I'VE FAILED AGAIN! [comments] => 5 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 36 [informant] => bobotheclown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Suicide spells FREEDOM

Contributed by bobotheclown on Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 11:19:49 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I can smell the pain
Which burns in my heart, unquenchable
Suicide spells FREEDOM!
I'm afraid, but I must do this
Forgive me oh God for I know not what I do

I cut deep and with blood
Flows freedom, a freedom
I haven't tasted in months
I must NOT be afraid
I know I've failed, but I can't help it

I see the cuts outlined in blood
Tasting my twisted fantasies
And the pain which I birthed
I wish I could end all this *****
I'm crying like a pregnant 'virgin'
Holding the razor in my dilapidated hands

Feeling this pain cut ever so deep
I never thought I could feel this much
Fear tingles up my spine
As the blood continues to flow
I still stand tall, "Suicide spells FREEDOM!"

Read the story on my skin
You may be able to decipher
I'm feeling the coldness
It caresses my bones
And screams I'VE FAILED AGAIN!

Copyright © bobotheclown ... [ 2003-10-27 23:19:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Suicide spells FREEDOM (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 12:02:23 AM AEST
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Oh me! I don't know what to say about this poem. It's written really well but sadens me.
I know how it feels when u seem 2 not have joy in life. If it weren't for God and my angels i would be six foot under right now! Thank God and prayer from others that I have a zeal 2 live now!
U might wonna check out my new post as it seems 2 be rampede right now., We had a suicide in our town last week!
This poem really touches my heart and draws u into my prayers.
this poem was written in 1995 called SUICIDE!
hang tuff my friend as u r such a good writer and we need u here on planet Earth as each poem of agony will let others know they r not alone.
prayer, peace, joy, luv,
emy

Re: Suicide spells FREEDOM (User Rating: 1 )
by Cancer on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 12:51:44 AM AEST
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damn. cold and to the core. don't know what that means, but that's what this was. flawless write. every time i think you've peaked, you throw down another bloody scrawl that tops the last.
as for the feeling expressed. i don't know if this is how you really feel or a seperated perspective, but if this is what you're going through, lame as it sounds, i'm here for you. i won't throw any empty-headed "tough it out" bullsh*t at you, but if you need to talk, PM me. if suicide seems like your only option, i won't try to guilt trip you into suffering longer, but i will say i'd miss reading your work.

51

Re: Suicide spells FREEDOM (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 06:09:03 AM AEST
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Ah Joel, I smell the pain as well ... your write fills me with the same feelings I want to express ... you have a way of saying it a lot deeper than I though ... excellent write ... Jan

Re: Suicide spells FREEDOM (User Rating: 1 )
by TundraHydra on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 10:36:51 AM AEST
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i wish that i could join you there in the blissful moments of death but i have projects and people that i must see through to the end so i cant die now. great write. keep it up.

Re: Suicide spells FREEDOM (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 07:08:17 AM AEST
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How the hell did I manage to miss this one. Wow Joel, I really am speechless on this one. You always manage to surprise me with your writings, and no two writings ever fail to impress me. I am amazed, really truly amazed. Awesome poem.

Stacey

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