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Delicious Passions
Contributed by
sugar0986
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Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 03:33:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Today you desire love,
and whisper delicious passions,
found beyond the depths of confusion
of the silky white clouds.
To find your true love, at last.
Copyright ©
sugar0986
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2003-10-27 15:33:20] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Delicious Passions
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jellybellyprincess on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 03:36:54 PM AEST (User
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My favorite line- "silky white clouds". I don't know why that hit me, because I'm sure it's been said more than once, but it's just beautiful. Short and sweet!
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Re: Delicious Passions
(User Rating: 1 ) by Crow on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 06:43:15 PM AEST (User
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I like this, so gentle a write,Crow |
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