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Insane Test 357
Contributed by
tundrahydra
on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 02:25:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Why does the nice guy finish last?
Why does time tick by slowly when it should go fast?
I知 alright. I知 alright. I知 great.
Why do people look at me that way?
Why do you contradict everything that I say?
I知 alright. I知 alright. I知 fine.
Why does the world go round?
Why am I confused and never found?
I知 alright. I知 alright. I知 well.
Why is my tone raising?
Why are my eyes blazing?
I知 alright! I知 alright! I知 not well!
I知 not shouting because its fun!
No I知 not stoned and no I知 not done!
You値l listen to me and all I have to say!
Hello and who are you.
I知 perfect. How 礎out you?
Oh I知 alright, I知 alright. I知 fine.
Copyright ﾂｩ
tundrahydra
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2003-10-27 14:25:15]
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Re: Insane Test 357
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by Cancer on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 05:49:44 PM AEST
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i'm at a loss for an accurate comment. something about it just hooked me. interesting piece.
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Re: Insane Test 357
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 06:38:48 PM AEST
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interesting indeed loved the 1st question I ask that a lot myself. Good write.
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Re: Insane Test 357
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by Destiny on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 08:41:04 PM AEST
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| you're an awesome writer, keep at it |
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Re: Insane Test 357
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by afraid_of_fear on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 03:51:03 PM AEST
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I was hooked too - brilliant write : )
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Re: Insane Test 357
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by Rawkergurl2003 on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 02:06:03 AM AEST
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| cant quite explain why i like it. but i do. |
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