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Array ( [sid] => 25851 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I always let you down [time] => 2003-10-27 07:35:38 [hometext] => This poem is about my current best friend Ashleigh, to me she is absooutely everything, but there was this one day when I just couldn't cope and I lashed out at her. [bodytext] => I always let you down,
I’m always sad,
I make you worry,
And make you mad

I’m sorry for this afternoon,
When I was unhappy,
Things just weren’t going well,
I was not a happy chappy

I don’t know what was wrong,
Nor the reason I was feeling,
That hurt and bitterness,
I guess I was grieving

Things just haven’t been the same,
Since you came into my life,
You saved me from death,
And I owe you my life

Please forgive me,
I’m sorry for walking away,
And rejecting your kindness,
Today was just not my day

The pain that I feel,
You know to well,
But together we can beat it,
And come out of our shell

Together we are strong,
And soon we’ll overcome,
This trouble we are having,
And make ourselves belong

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I always let you down

Contributed by cammy on Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 07:35:38 AM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

I always let you down,
I’m always sad,
I make you worry,
And make you mad

I’m sorry for this afternoon,
When I was unhappy,
Things just weren’t going well,
I was not a happy chappy

I don’t know what was wrong,
Nor the reason I was feeling,
That hurt and bitterness,
I guess I was grieving

Things just haven’t been the same,
Since you came into my life,
You saved me from death,
And I owe you my life

Please forgive me,
I’m sorry for walking away,
And rejecting your kindness,
Today was just not my day

The pain that I feel,
You know to well,
But together we can beat it,
And come out of our shell

Together we are strong,
And soon we’ll overcome,
This trouble we are having,
And make ourselves belong

Copyright Â© cammy ... [ 2003-10-27 07:35:38]
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Re: I always let you down (User Rating: 1 )
by mercedes on Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 10:09:46 AM AEST
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We all need a good friend. Hope all goes well.

Re: I always let you down (User Rating: 1 )
by Shmily on Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 10:40:06 PM AEST
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I know how you're feeling, because I have the same problem. Just remember that you should never give up on what you believe to be a true friendship. If it was, it is, and it will always be... Wishing you the best of Luck!

*K

Re: I always let you down (User Rating: 1 )
by Shmily on Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 10:40:35 PM AEST
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P.S. Wonderful poem by the way!!! :)

*K

Re: I always let you down (User Rating: 1 )
by SpreadYourWings on Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 03:40:04 PM AEST
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I too have dealt with this problem. Hope everything goes well for you

Re: I always let you down (User Rating: 1 )
by stargazer on Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 10:24:36 PM AEST
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... This hit home. I saved my friend from death and she was there... when I completely broken down. And without each other... where would we be? Just let your friend know that you need her and still care... she'll understand.

-amy

Re: I always let you down (User Rating: 1 )
by callistonynaeve on Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 03:30:08 PM AEST
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Nice, but remember if she is your true friend, she will understand you emotions can't always be supportive of her, she needs to support you too!

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