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Array ( [sid] => 25830 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Send Me Away [time] => 2003-10-26 22:02:19 [hometext] => useless rambling.... [bodytext] => These tears
wont stop
this pain
wont end
Why am I here?
Why do I hurt?
No one to save me
from myself
no on to hear
my silent screams
Cant you love me?
Cant you care?
Send me away
Help me
Free my soul
Unlock my
happiness
See my joy
But you dont
You just stare
live your life
not caring
not seeing
not seeing
whats really here
not seeing
all the anguish
Blinded by
your ingorance
Silenced
my heart beat
only hearing
what you want
but you know
thats not real
It's all in your head
You'll never see
You'll never help
You'll only kill me
So slowly I cant feel it
Yet
So horrible it dulls
my senses
Send me away
somehow
Rid me of you
I've tried
but failed
You can succeed
Tear my heart
from my chest
Taste of warm blood
Feel my skin cool
I know you want to
I see it in your eyes
and Hear it in your voice
I know you hate
You hate
what can hurt you
You hate
what you know
You hate
Me
Pity your soul
Send me away
Let me fly
Earn my broken wings
but no
you just stare
You just cause more
Pain
Why do I live?
Why do you LET me live?
Just leave me
Go and never return
If I must live
It wont be with you
For if it must
Im not living...
Just a body
No soul
no life
No will
no hope
Just Kill me
So you can stay
And stare some more... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 13 [informant] => PsychoticDreamz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Send Me Away

Contributed by PsychoticDreamz on Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 10:02:19 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



These tears
wont stop
this pain
wont end
Why am I here?
Why do I hurt?
No one to save me
from myself
no on to hear
my silent screams
Cant you love me?
Cant you care?
Send me away
Help me
Free my soul
Unlock my
happiness
See my joy
But you dont
You just stare
live your life
not caring
not seeing
not seeing
whats really here
not seeing
all the anguish
Blinded by
your ingorance
Silenced
my heart beat
only hearing
what you want
but you know
thats not real
It's all in your head
You'll never see
You'll never help
You'll only kill me
So slowly I cant feel it
Yet
So horrible it dulls
my senses
Send me away
somehow
Rid me of you
I've tried
but failed
You can succeed
Tear my heart
from my chest
Taste of warm blood
Feel my skin cool
I know you want to
I see it in your eyes
and Hear it in your voice
I know you hate
You hate
what can hurt you
You hate
what you know
You hate
Me
Pity your soul
Send me away
Let me fly
Earn my broken wings
but no
you just stare
You just cause more
Pain
Why do I live?
Why do you LET me live?
Just leave me
Go and never return
If I must live
It wont be with you
For if it must
Im not living...
Just a body
No soul
no life
No will
no hope
Just Kill me
So you can stay
And stare some more...




Copyright © PsychoticDreamz ... [ 2003-10-26 22:02:19]
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Re: Send Me Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 10:15:31 PM AEST
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A really awesome write.... it had me spellbound from beginning to end...
Jenni


Re: Send Me Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 12:36:59 AM AEST
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Brilliant!

I love the way its written, i love the words use and i love the message it gives...basically i love it.

I can relate to this quite well, like many others it hits home

Take care
- Becca


Re: Send Me Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 08:04:45 AM AEST
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useless rambling yeh right,
This was a bloody awesome write, very gripping, liked it alot.


Re: Send Me Away (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 11:48:35 PM AEST
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wow very gripping... I love what you write I can relate to this so much and this is no different. Keep it up

Bobo (Joel)




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