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Array ( [sid] => 25815 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Secret Mens Business [time] => 2003-10-26 18:45:54 [hometext] => Why do we mere males act so? [bodytext] => I listen to her words
of enchantment that I hear
words that linger in my mind
words I sometimes fear.

Pictures painted in many colours
with carefully planned out strokes
that are touched here and there
upon the page of this Aussie bloke.

I try to be the right stuff
I work hard at it all the while,
but always seem to stuff it up
and my thoughts end up in a pile.

a pile of twisted dreams and tales
of love and other things
stuff that I know nothing of
but when I expeience them, they make me sing.

Struth! What am I saying?
My mates won't understand
When I talk of love and little birds
this is not the making of a man!

Better end it here
they will think that I am queer
but I hope my girl just hears these words
I love you~

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 21 [informant] => twinkletoes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Secret Mens Business

Contributed by twinkletoes on Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 06:45:54 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I listen to her words
of enchantment that I hear
words that linger in my mind
words I sometimes fear.

Pictures painted in many colours
with carefully planned out strokes
that are touched here and there
upon the page of this Aussie bloke.

I try to be the right stuff
I work hard at it all the while,
but always seem to stuff it up
and my thoughts end up in a pile.

a pile of twisted dreams and tales
of love and other things
stuff that I know nothing of
but when I expeience them, they make me sing.

Struth! What am I saying?
My mates won't understand
When I talk of love and little birds
this is not the making of a man!

Better end it here
they will think that I am queer
but I hope my girl just hears these words
I love you~

Copyright © twinkletoes ... [ 2003-10-26 18:45:54]
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Re: Secret Mens Business (User Rating: 1 )
by Philipa on Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 06:59:30 PM AEST
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twinkletoes, I hope you TELL her you love her. Remember you may think we can read your mind...but we can't. *wink*

Philipa

Re: Secret Mens Business (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 07:25:57 PM AEST
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Love is something you do..not say.

If you love this woman prove it to her and who gives a damn what your mates, or anyone else thinks about it. Can't have your cake and eat it too my friend. Well done! Larry

Re: Secret Mens Business (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 09:07:44 PM AEST
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Forget all this crap love is too hard to come by go for the girl.
shari

Re: Secret Mens Business (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 01:39:04 AM AEST
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empty words doesn't make a man..better be practical..prove your love to her..

Re: Secret Mens Business (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 02:56:31 AM AEST
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ahhh, love your poem...
keep letting your heart roam
and your pen over pages
for love, friend, is ageless

hugs n' love, nessa

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