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Array ( [sid] => 25809 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No reason to live [time] => 2003-10-26 15:52:21 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I can do no right, only make mistakes
I have tried for 27 years to please someone
But cause pain, heartache, mistrust, anger, sadness
Is all I seem to have done.

I thought I was ready to give my life a second chance
Began to make plans for the future as I see it
Got a spring in my step, a smile lit up my face
But here once again I sit

It only took a call from you
I dropped my plans, did what was wrong
I don’t regret my time with you
But there can be no happy ending to this sad song

You asked me why I wanted this
You made sure I knew I had a choice
But you were wrong you see
I must obey, I have no voice

My soul is slowly drying up and dieing
I have no future that I can see
I deserve this pain and suffering
I will never be truly free

Each time I see you, I give myself to you
This part you take is my will to live
I surrender my body and soul to your touch
I have nothing else left to give

Why do you hate me so much
What did I ever do to you
Why can’t you just kill me now
Maybe than I can start out fresh and new
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 239 [topic] => 36 [informant] => mercedes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

No reason to live

Contributed by mercedes on Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 03:52:21 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I can do no right, only make mistakes
I have tried for 27 years to please someone
But cause pain, heartache, mistrust, anger, sadness
Is all I seem to have done.

I thought I was ready to give my life a second chance
Began to make plans for the future as I see it
Got a spring in my step, a smile lit up my face
But here once again I sit

It only took a call from you
I dropped my plans, did what was wrong
I don’t regret my time with you
But there can be no happy ending to this sad song

You asked me why I wanted this
You made sure I knew I had a choice
But you were wrong you see
I must obey, I have no voice

My soul is slowly drying up and dieing
I have no future that I can see
I deserve this pain and suffering
I will never be truly free

Each time I see you, I give myself to you
This part you take is my will to live
I surrender my body and soul to your touch
I have nothing else left to give

Why do you hate me so much
What did I ever do to you
Why can’t you just kill me now
Maybe than I can start out fresh and new

Copyright Â© mercedes ... [ 2003-10-26 15:52:21]
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Re: No reason to live (User Rating: 1 )
by POOBEAR on Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 05:45:48 PM AEST
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Hello,
I can relate but you don't deserve to suffer
any kind of pain.I suffer from depression
and tried once to take my life. Some mornings
I don't want to get out of bed but I found that
writing helped me so much. I know you don't
want to hear the crap about "take it day by
day" but that is what I have found i have to
do even though I hate that kind of Mary Poppins kind of advice. You express your
feelings so greatly and just writing this
you are reaching out and people here listen.
If you ever want to talk I am always here
Take Care,
Poobear

Re: No reason to live (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 05:59:55 PM AEST
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We all have been there once or twice, my ex-wife did so many mean and hurtful things to me, I too thought I could do no right. In fact I almost stopped writing poetry, I thought about taking my life, but what would that do. So with the help of poetry and my friends, I was able to let the emotions out. So take it from me, it's not worth it. Great write, I felt it.

The Phantom

Re: No reason to live (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 07:46:19 PM AEST
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this is so sad I can feel your pain so deeply. Be advised there is always stuff to hang on to no matter how bleak the pictures looks. Learn from your mistakes thats the only thing u can do. Hang in there.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: No reason to live (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenheartedfool on Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 09:01:18 PM AEST
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A very good write. I have tried to take my like more then once but I have come to the conclusion that no person is worth dying over. And I believe there is a right person for everyone. Stay strong.
Brokenheartedfool

Re: No reason to live (User Rating: 1 )
by Woodyopa on Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 08:32:48 AM AEST
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I feel your pain too...i just lost a love one, THE ONE, and now she is with someone else.....i myself have though of ending it...but every once in awhile i think of the people around me, what would I do to them for the action i was about to do....then i realize the pain i face is nothing compared to the pain i would give!
Woody

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