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[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => rain, proof and cookies
[time] => 2003-10-26 11:42:14
[hometext] => listen closely...life is a symphony...
[bodytext] => here i sit listening to the rain fall
dripping into a bucket from the roof,
a gentle steady soothing music
earth life's continuous proof,
it is peaceful, somewhat chilly
a quiet and reflective moment,
mists as far as the eye can see
now before me, mood is set,
my life as i have lived it so far
i sit, think of all the many things,
that brought me to this place right now
and happiness my loved ones bring,
i loose my train of thoughts
as cat, curious, tips the rainwater,
me, walking over to pick it up and
watching as he gets that put out wet cat look,
our toes both squish, and my foot
now soaking and cold, i smiled,
picking up dante, our orange and white cat,
he lets me hold him close a while,
he purrs as rain pelts down outside
safe in my arms, then he goes to the table,
stealing my daughters chocolate cookies
munching away while he is able,
raining down in torrents, all goes dark
everything has become a cave of cozy,
height of the storm now, how bizarre,
here peeks through the sun, all rosey,
here i sit again, listening to the rain
dripping into bucket uprighted once more,
gentle mellow peaceful sounds on the roof
my earth life's continuous proof.
°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*
[comments] => 15
[counter] => 348
[topic] => 21
[informant] => ladyfawn
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 10
[ratings] => 2
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
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)
rain, proof and cookies
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 11:42:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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here i sit listening to the rain fall
dripping into a bucket from the roof,
a gentle steady soothing music
earth life's continuous proof,
it is peaceful, somewhat chilly
a quiet and reflective moment,
mists as far as the eye can see
now before me, mood is set,
my life as i have lived it so far
i sit, think of all the many things,
that brought me to this place right now
and happiness my loved ones bring,
i loose my train of thoughts
as cat, curious, tips the rainwater,
me, walking over to pick it up and
watching as he gets that put out wet cat look,
our toes both squish, and my foot
now soaking and cold, i smiled,
picking up dante, our orange and white cat,
he lets me hold him close a while,
he purrs as rain pelts down outside
safe in my arms, then he goes to the table,
stealing my daughters chocolate cookies
munching away while he is able,
raining down in torrents, all goes dark
everything has become a cave of cozy,
height of the storm now, how bizarre,
here peeks through the sun, all rosey,
here i sit again, listening to the rain
dripping into bucket uprighted once more,
gentle mellow peaceful sounds on the roof
my earth life's continuous proof.
°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*
Copyright ©
ladyfawn
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Re: rain, proof and cookies
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 11:55:34 AM AEST
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| I could see and hear every moment Nessa :o) Life is a symphony to those who choose to hear. Very well done! Larry |
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Re: rain, proof and cookies
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by Bongo on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 12:24:09 PM AEST
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You sit with cat and spilt bucket
Thoughts all grande and well founded
Be careful my cookie when writing this punet
For a computer and wet floor is sad proof when grounded. |
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Re: rain, proof and cookies
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by PoeticReign on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 12:25:39 PM AEST
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'Tis a beautiful poem that is so vivid in description that I can 'see' it all... great job :)
~Nikki |
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Re: rain, proof and cookies
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 01:30:00 PM AEST
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music to my eyes good write
shari |
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Re: rain, proof and cookies
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 06:14:47 PM AEST
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| What beautiful images ... I could almost smell the rain ... such a peaceful write ... Jan |
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Re: rain, proof and cookies
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 07:14:12 PM AEST
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| just a super write, I imagined myself there. Crow |
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Re: rain, proof and cookies
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 09:02:22 PM AEST
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Good poem, Ness..great imagery.... thanks for your company during the rain..
Jenni |
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Re: rain, proof and cookies
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by MoonlitAngel on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 09:32:20 PM AEST
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This is so... wow. So mellow and thought provoking. Great write, I like it!
~ Dee |
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Re: rain, proof and cookies
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 10:09:07 PM AEST
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As beautiful as always Nessa, i love this one...life may not be a symphony to me but your poetry always is....
Love 'n Hugs 'n Kisses 'n Moobhas
- Becca |
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Re: rain, proof and cookies
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by venkat on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 12:43:06 AM AEST
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| Aww, it is a gentle mellow symphony.. venkat |
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 11:32:03 AM AEST
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And so I dance in my heart to the music of your words..You give me a peaceful and soothing feeling with your symphonic beauty..Absolutely purrrrfect!! *smiles*
(((Nessa))) |
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Re: rain, proof and cookies
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by norm on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 06:55:18 PM AEST
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As sweet a poem as they come
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If I were a cat
I'd feel just like that,
But I am a man
Please, hold me like that.. |
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Re: rain, proof and cookies
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by Lone_er on
Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 06:40:10 PM AEST
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Tender and soft musings of a gentle heart. Wonderfully done maam.---Russ
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Re: rain, proof and cookies
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 07:38:41 PM AEST
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| symphony so beautiful, leaking roof perhaps, glad you found a retreat inside the waterfall of your ranch, Mara didn't need the cookie anyways, love and huggs to you Val |
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Re: rain, proof and cookies
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 02:56:41 AM AEST
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Nessa,
I havent been getting about
came to you on my first day out
lovely poem about little things
moments when life really sings
bob |
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