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Array ( [sid] => 25772 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Take Off The Mask ~* [time] => 2003-10-25 23:24:29 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Take a look into the mirror,
you dont see what i do,
a selfish little brat,
is what has become of you,
but pathetic as you are,
i have no sympathy,
all the foolish words,
you believed that you could say to me,
those times when people laughed,
at everything you said you brat,
tell me now just who,
did you think they were laughing at,
they didnt hear your words,
they didnt even care,
you thought it was all of jealousy,
whenever they would glare,
looking down on everyone,
thinking you could judge all,
did you think you were on the top,
you thought that you couldnt fall,
sorry to burst your bubble,
i guess it is my task,
but i liked you so much better,
when you werent wearing a mask. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Chanti [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Take Off The Mask ~*

Contributed by Chanti on Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 11:24:29 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Take a look into the mirror,
you dont see what i do,
a selfish little brat,
is what has become of you,
but pathetic as you are,
i have no sympathy,
all the foolish words,
you believed that you could say to me,
those times when people laughed,
at everything you said you brat,
tell me now just who,
did you think they were laughing at,
they didnt hear your words,
they didnt even care,
you thought it was all of jealousy,
whenever they would glare,
looking down on everyone,
thinking you could judge all,
did you think you were on the top,
you thought that you couldnt fall,
sorry to burst your bubble,
i guess it is my task,
but i liked you so much better,
when you werent wearing a mask.

Copyright © Chanti ... [ 2003-10-25 23:24:29]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Take Off The Mask ~* (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 01:35:15 AM AEST
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Great poem ... good venting ... Jan

Re: Take Off The Mask ~* (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 01:36:20 AM AEST
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This was different from what u usually write more subdued. Good though very often I can see through ppl's masks and walls as well.

Bobo (Joel)

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