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Array ( [sid] => 25759 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The devils calling [time] => 2003-10-25 19:32:33 [hometext] => This is more of a rough draft than anything, just needed a second opinion [bodytext] => Can you hear them calling
When you are all alone
They know your darkest secrets
When you hear their voice, in dread you moan

They are only in your head
Yet their breath you feel on your skin
They want you to go with them
They want to show you where they've been

They invade your dreams at night
Never giving you a moments rest
They whisper to you all day long
They say they know whats best

Give up this life you live
They will show you a world unknown
Give your soul to them
Leave this body of skin and bone

It is not death they tell you
Do not be afraid
Leave this old sad life behind
A new life they will give in trade

You want this life to come to an end
You want to take their offered hand
But can you believe all their promises
Whats its really like, this unknown land? [comments] => 1 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 13 [informant] => mercedes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

The devils calling

Contributed by mercedes on Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 07:32:33 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Can you hear them calling
When you are all alone
They know your darkest secrets
When you hear their voice, in dread you moan

They are only in your head
Yet their breath you feel on your skin
They want you to go with them
They want to show you where they've been

They invade your dreams at night
Never giving you a moments rest
They whisper to you all day long
They say they know whats best

Give up this life you live
They will show you a world unknown
Give your soul to them
Leave this body of skin and bone

It is not death they tell you
Do not be afraid
Leave this old sad life behind
A new life they will give in trade

You want this life to come to an end
You want to take their offered hand
But can you believe all their promises
Whats its really like, this unknown land?

Copyright © mercedes ... [ 2003-10-25 19:32:33]
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Re: The devils calling (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 08:36:03 PM AEST
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Might be a rough draft to you but sounded awesome to me.
Cant see where there should be any changes, it looks good from as it is.

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