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Array ( [sid] => 25750 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hear Me [time] => 2003-10-25 15:52:25 [hometext] => damage from the past, I regret not trying harder to bring her closer. [now missing] so selfish I would never let her tell me the words. [bodytext] => My hands have the strength of a thousand men in this, countless warriors in heart
surround me.

If you dare to hurt the woman
and her childern, think of me
not far away, every breath you draw.

Abandon my God for wrath,
struck fear in your heart of the past
let you live.

Pray I find a beautiful child
and her mother, you hide them away.

Brutal hands you keep,
no place is to far..........Crow

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Hear Me

Contributed by crow on Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 03:52:25 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

My hands have the strength of a thousand men in this, countless warriors in heart
surround me.

If you dare to hurt the woman
and her childern, think of me
not far away, every breath you draw.

Abandon my God for wrath,
struck fear in your heart of the past
let you live.

Pray I find a beautiful child
and her mother, you hide them away.

Brutal hands you keep,
no place is to far..........Crow

Copyright © crow ... [ 2003-10-25 15:52:25]
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Re: Hear Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 04:14:46 PM AEST
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"Pray I find a beautiful child
and her mother, you hide them away.

Brutal hands you keep,
no place is to far.........."

Touchy...touchy...touchy. Great write, Crow.
Saira

Re: Hear Me (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 07:06:41 PM AEST
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Soul touching, fellow feeling, rage, kindness, indiginant integrity, oh my Crow....I could go on and on and so, Such character....such soul.
Beauiful meaningful write again again
lovingcritters
You're My Hero

Re: Hear Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 07:53:00 PM AEST
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Soulful as always...Excellent job!
Angel always...godspeed...joni

Re: Hear Me (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 01:50:26 AM AEST
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I spend so much time trying to fathom your words, because there is soooo much in what you say ... and not to be taken lightly, because you write with sincerity, compassion and depth ... this one no less, beautiful write ... Jan

Re: Hear Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 06:20:46 PM AEST
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your writing always touches my heart. so protective, so strong, so honest
this poem has so much quiet passion in it, beautiful write

merry

Re: Hear Me (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 11:45:06 AM AEST
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Could not hold back the emotions reading this..so many of them.I love it.

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