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Array ( [sid] => 25603 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Reality Factor [time] => 2003-10-23 04:45:49 [hometext] => .......the harshness of it all.......... [bodytext] => The ache is always there
three miles plus seventy-two
not a day in sight
that I could ever see you.

The trouble with us is
too much thought
naughty or nice
we just do what we ought.

The lust from day one
a simple little drive
rose petals and glitter
worth the will to survive.

The knowledge was easy
the road so dark
a painful reminder
we were more than just a lark.

The need for your touch
the validation of lust
is a constant demon
one I cannot trust.

The closing of the door
open the window wide
forever in my dreams
never far from you I hide. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 48 [informant] => jaeann [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Reality Factor

Contributed by jaeann on Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 04:45:49 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

The ache is always there
three miles plus seventy-two
not a day in sight
that I could ever see you.

The trouble with us is
too much thought
naughty or nice
we just do what we ought.

The lust from day one
a simple little drive
rose petals and glitter
worth the will to survive.

The knowledge was easy
the road so dark
a painful reminder
we were more than just a lark.

The need for your touch
the validation of lust
is a constant demon
one I cannot trust.

The closing of the door
open the window wide
forever in my dreams
never far from you I hide.

Copyright © jaeann ... [ 2003-10-23 04:45:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Reality Factor (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 05:18:40 AM AEST
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Well written.the line "forever in my dreams, never far from you I hide" wraps beautifully. venkat

Re: Reality Factor (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 05:24:37 AM AEST
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so very well written and moving
Shari

Re: Reality Factor (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 03:58:19 PM AEST
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good write, i like the ending, Crow

Re: Reality Factor (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 17th November 2006 @ 06:56:26 PM AEST
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I liked this poem. Good job!

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