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Helplessly tremblingly quietly cry
Selflessly gently saying goodbye
Falsely but bravely winking your eye

Loved them so much, you thought you would die
Pick yourself up? You can’t even try
Lost your whole world, and still don’t know why
You say your ok! But know it’s a lie

Blindly restlessly finding your way
Hiding your heart till the sky is less grey
Selfishly struggle and damn what they say
Slowly unwrapping a sunnier day

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Sunnier Day

Contributed by humphdj on Wednesday, 21st August 2002 @ 09:18:53 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Silently sullenly longingly sigh
Helplessly tremblingly quietly cry
Selflessly gently saying goodbye
Falsely but bravely winking your eye

Loved them so much, you thought you would die
Pick yourself up? You can’t even try
Lost your whole world, and still don’t know why
You say your ok! But know it’s a lie

Blindly restlessly finding your way
Hiding your heart till the sky is less grey
Selfishly struggle and damn what they say
Slowly unwrapping a sunnier day

Copyright Â© humphdj ... [ 2002-08-21 09:18:53]
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Re: Sunnier Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 21st August 2002 @ 12:16:48 PM AEST
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This is nice, Dave..I know the feelings..
Jenni

Re: Sunnier Day (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Wednesday, 21st August 2002 @ 12:30:08 PM AEST
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This is great! Let us hope that their is more sunshine out their for all of us!
Gin

Re: Sunnier Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Friday, 23rd August 2002 @ 09:00:29 AM AEST
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I missed this yesterday! It's beautiful, poignant and has made me cry......I love your poetry.

(and since Ihave only just told you a moment ago that I had a good day today...I think you should buy me the box of tissues I now need ;) )

Re: Sunnier Day (User Rating: 1 )
by chatabox on Monday, 26th August 2002 @ 10:39:28 PM AEST
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As you left and said your goodbyes,
you forgot to tell my heart
how to live without you.

equisite poetry Dave.

Pen.

Re: Sunnier Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Patricia_Petro on Thursday, 29th August 2002 @ 09:29:33 PM AEST
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Hi Dave,
"...Slowly unwrapping a sunnier day."
So true...very nice and warm. Beautiful poem.
~Patricia

Re: Sunnier Day (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 02:14:07 AM AEST
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Dear Dave @-<-<<-
I love this one! What a super write! You had my interest from your first line all the way.. left me wanting more.. may all your days be sunny my friend, always Nessa

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