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Array ( [sid] => 25581 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Eden's Fire [time] => 2003-10-22 21:46:32 [hometext] => Another poem inspired by the vampire novel I'm writing. This one is a bit long, and would take too much space to explain here. Hope you enjoy. [bodytext] => In realms where my earthly being floats suspended in empty air
Wrapped in fleeting fantasies and ephemeral visions
I dream of the Lady fair, in all her celestial light
Come to take me away, to taste of Eden’s fire

Adorned is she in a silvery glow, her gown of gossamer brilliant
With her pale limbs reached out to enfold me in heavenly embrace
Starry eyes hath she, dark and deep as eternal night
And a crown of dancing moonlight sits on her golden head

To the lushest of Gardens she brings me, that Lady
All green and alive with the Spring
With endless weaving carpets of every rainbow shade
And the cloudless blue sky bright overhead

For endless hours it seems, we walk in blissful silence
And I crush her hand in my own, fearing that I may lose her
So fragile is my dream-goddess, with the light shining through her phantom skin
So very cold and dreadful pale my quiet and ghostly companion

Eden, fairest Eden, in all your venomous beauty
How like my Lady you are! Poison in a Healer’s guise!
Treacherous, my temptress Eden, beguiling and without mercy
Promising everything to trap the lonely soul, and yielding nothing but misery in the end

Mother of demons, this Lady, this witch
Lillith! Mistress to cruelty and pain
When light pierces darkness, shadow must hide
And to your bosom it flees and encroaches your heart

Come, torturous lover, and free me of my unearthly bonds
Let the soul you have stolen rest in its despair
Thief of innocence, stealer of virtue, merging your black nature with mine
Cursing the one once so faithful to you, and dooming me to be your slave

Weaver of sinister tricks, chaining my spirit to yours!
Shall I walk as a corpse among the living? Steal the innocent pulse of their hearts
So that I may endure, a cowardly creature born of your sin
Hiding in the comfort of the night, a monster made of nightmares and death?

In Hell, Lillith-witch, may your road find its end
When all evil you have wrought is no more
And may we endure eternity together, murderous lover
Prisoners of the fiery pit in which you have cast me
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Eden's Fire

Contributed by SinfullyTwisted on Wednesday, 22nd October 2003 @ 09:46:32 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



In realms where my earthly being floats suspended in empty air
Wrapped in fleeting fantasies and ephemeral visions
I dream of the Lady fair, in all her celestial light
Come to take me away, to taste of Eden’s fire

Adorned is she in a silvery glow, her gown of gossamer brilliant
With her pale limbs reached out to enfold me in heavenly embrace
Starry eyes hath she, dark and deep as eternal night
And a crown of dancing moonlight sits on her golden head

To the lushest of Gardens she brings me, that Lady
All green and alive with the Spring
With endless weaving carpets of every rainbow shade
And the cloudless blue sky bright overhead

For endless hours it seems, we walk in blissful silence
And I crush her hand in my own, fearing that I may lose her
So fragile is my dream-goddess, with the light shining through her phantom skin
So very cold and dreadful pale my quiet and ghostly companion

Eden, fairest Eden, in all your venomous beauty
How like my Lady you are! Poison in a Healer’s guise!
Treacherous, my temptress Eden, beguiling and without mercy
Promising everything to trap the lonely soul, and yielding nothing but misery in the end

Mother of demons, this Lady, this witch
Lillith! Mistress to cruelty and pain
When light pierces darkness, shadow must hide
And to your bosom it flees and encroaches your heart

Come, torturous lover, and free me of my unearthly bonds
Let the soul you have stolen rest in its despair
Thief of innocence, stealer of virtue, merging your black nature with mine
Cursing the one once so faithful to you, and dooming me to be your slave

Weaver of sinister tricks, chaining my spirit to yours!
Shall I walk as a corpse among the living? Steal the innocent pulse of their hearts
So that I may endure, a cowardly creature born of your sin
Hiding in the comfort of the night, a monster made of nightmares and death?

In Hell, Lillith-witch, may your road find its end
When all evil you have wrought is no more
And may we endure eternity together, murderous lover
Prisoners of the fiery pit in which you have cast me




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