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[title] => When Does Life Begin
[time] => 2003-10-22 08:18:28
[hometext] => There is a bright future
[bodytext] => In case you don't know
I'm the oldest on site,
If anyone's older
It's not come to light.
I wanted to say,
Right off the bat,
There's sex in my life,
Think long about that.
You kids in your sixties
And those who are younger,
Write passionate poems
That speak of your hunger.
I find I'm unwilling
To write of the acts,
But here is a list
of various facts.
The 'Pearl' and I,
We look at each other,
A feeling envelopes
It feels like a smother.
To hold and to have
is part of our life,
The 'Pearl' is a super,
wonderful wife.
For those who think eighty's
The end of the scene,
LIfe becomes more
Like an oiled machine.
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When Does Life Begin
Contributed by
norm
on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2003 @ 08:18:28 AM in AEST
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In case you don't know
I'm the oldest on site,
If anyone's older
It's not come to light.
I wanted to say,
Right off the bat,
There's sex in my life,
Think long about that.
You kids in your sixties
And those who are younger,
Write passionate poems
That speak of your hunger.
I find I'm unwilling
To write of the acts,
But here is a list
of various facts.
The 'Pearl' and I,
We look at each other,
A feeling envelopes
It feels like a smother.
To hold and to have
is part of our life,
The 'Pearl' is a super,
wonderful wife.
For those who think eighty's
The end of the scene,
LIfe becomes more
Like an oiled machine.
Copyright ©
norm
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2003-10-22 08:18:28]
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Re: When Does Life Begin
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by Kalika on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2003 @ 09:01:10 AM AEST
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MY gram told me and all the grandkids on her birthday this yr( she hit 80) that she still feels the fire too...... It was disturbing coming from her, but from u it doesnt make me want to run and hide......sounds liek u and ur wife have a wonderful relationship........ congrats....
great write....
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Re: When Does Life Begin
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by LovingWhispers on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2003 @ 09:25:48 AM AEST
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All the fancy poetry in the world could not touch me as this does..the feelings shared by you and your"pearl"..Just gorgeous!
I fully understand the years of committment involved...and not everything is always roses but you and your dear wife are the perfect example of real true love. Cheers to many more happy years ,sunny days and warm nights together *raises herbal tea*
*smiles*
Sharon and family(Kyle,Renae,Kody,Teagan and Indianna) |
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Re: When Does Life Begin
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2003 @ 10:14:09 AM AEST
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Norm this is great and Im happy to know you and also know that you and Pearl are so close.Everyone needs to follow your example. Im looking forward to having this with Gary as time goes on. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: When Does Life Begin
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2003 @ 11:42:01 AM AEST
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It is wonderful to see
A couple happy as thee
Where the fire still burns strong
Even after this long
Impressed I am by your love
Surely blessed by heaven above
May many years more remain
And always with loves refrain
Shari
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Re: When Does Life Begin
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2003 @ 06:38:42 PM AEST
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| You are so blessed - I hope you know how much ... my parents also have a wonderful marriage such as this ... Jan |
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Re: When Does Life Begin
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 12:44:59 PM AEST
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Re: When Does Life Begin
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 12:45:58 PM AEST
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I wish
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Re: When Does Life Begin
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 02:55:17 AM AEST
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This was a very loving poem Norm, I hope you showed it to your best girl Pearl!
I'll never forget how shocked I was when I voluteered at the Old Folks Home. We were instructed to close the door gently if we walked in on some have interecourse. I laughed, and said, "You're kidding, Right?"
Well, they weren't kidding me, and that's when I decided....that wouldn't be a very bad place to be! TeeHee....Life never ceases to amaze me.
What a fine example you have set for us all!
Stay in good health, and change the oil numerously!
lovingcritters
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