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Array ( [sid] => 25537 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => better then you [time] => 2003-10-22 04:54:52 [hometext] => i wish my x could see this [bodytext] => you know somthing?
im a better person when im with you
even though
you make me feel like nothing
because i can look at you drugged up to your eye balls picking on somone because their diffrent
and i can think "im better then you"

even though i watch you do things that were wrong
i never let you change my opinions
you only changed me for good
you didnt make me"your kinda person"
i want you to know that

you see
you didnt make me look bad
because compared to you i always shined

and now that your gone
i dont look to good
and im with the kind peaple so its not that i should
see im exactly where i want to be where i fit in

so forget about me now
because i dont want to watch you mess up
as long as your being you your just not good enought [comments] => 3 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 54 [informant] => loopylou [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => happypoetry )
better then you

Contributed by loopylou on Wednesday, 22nd October 2003 @ 04:54:52 AM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry



you know somthing?
im a better person when im with you
even though
you make me feel like nothing
because i can look at you drugged up to your eye balls picking on somone because their diffrent
and i can think "im better then you"

even though i watch you do things that were wrong
i never let you change my opinions
you only changed me for good
you didnt make me"your kinda person"
i want you to know that

you see
you didnt make me look bad
because compared to you i always shined

and now that your gone
i dont look to good
and im with the kind peaple so its not that i should
see im exactly where i want to be where i fit in

so forget about me now
because i dont want to watch you mess up
as long as your being you your just not good enought




Copyright © loopylou ... [ 2003-10-22 04:54:52]
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Re: better then you (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniel on Wednesday, 22nd October 2003 @ 05:38:39 AM AEST
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a touch of sugar, some salt to the wounds, and spellcheck will make everything all better... okay okay, i jest. but the salt may actually work! lol, good write; it sounds familiar to a lot of old memories. kudos! ;0) -daniel


Re: better then you (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 22nd October 2003 @ 05:49:05 AM AEST
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All rite!
U got it going on now!
I know the feeling very well!
Very good, positive write!
peace, joy, luv,
emy


Re: better then you (User Rating: 1 )
by Chanti on Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 01:53:39 AM AEST
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Ahhh i can relate... Ive been in the same situations with some people and now i look back at them, and i think 'your really messing up.' Great write!




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