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Array ( [sid] => 2551 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You [time] => 2002-08-21 06:14:03 [hometext] => Broken hearted, but i still cant live without him... [bodytext] => You made me promises that no one else could make, but in times of testing, those promises you did break.
I gave you my heart and my eternal trust, but you hurt me so many times and turned that trust into dust.
For you i would've done anything, moved the heavens if it made you smile. You didn't confide in me when you should've, instead for every problem you kept inside you pused me away another mile.
You were my light at the end of the tunnel and i thought you would never go out. You left me on my own with no one to turn to and for that i shall never forgive you, there's no doubt.
With thoughts of you, my head you always did fill, but the pain you put me through...a hole through my heart you did drill.
I hate the way you've moved on so quickly. like you've run on and left me all alone. I find it so hard to talk to now, 'cus everytime i call it's like you wanna put down the phone.
There's a crack in my heart which not even YOU could mend. I used to think we'd be together forever but it looks like our love has come to an end.
No matter how hard i try i can't seem to let go of the hurt and the pain. Although you hurt me and i want to hate you so much, i miss you more than anything and without you i'm going insane! x
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You

Contributed by Kiz on Wednesday, 21st August 2002 @ 06:14:03 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



You made me promises that no one else could make, but in times of testing, those promises you did break.
I gave you my heart and my eternal trust, but you hurt me so many times and turned that trust into dust.
For you i would've done anything, moved the heavens if it made you smile. You didn't confide in me when you should've, instead for every problem you kept inside you pused me away another mile.
You were my light at the end of the tunnel and i thought you would never go out. You left me on my own with no one to turn to and for that i shall never forgive you, there's no doubt.
With thoughts of you, my head you always did fill, but the pain you put me through...a hole through my heart you did drill.
I hate the way you've moved on so quickly. like you've run on and left me all alone. I find it so hard to talk to now, 'cus everytime i call it's like you wanna put down the phone.
There's a crack in my heart which not even YOU could mend. I used to think we'd be together forever but it looks like our love has come to an end.
No matter how hard i try i can't seem to let go of the hurt and the pain. Although you hurt me and i want to hate you so much, i miss you more than anything and without you i'm going insane! x




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Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissylee on Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 06:15:40 PM AEST
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love when broken really does hurt, but given time it can be mended.
peace, love and happy poetry


Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by norticus on Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 03:08:21 AM AEST
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I enjoy your passion. This poem is the sort of thing I look for in a chic. Of course that allows me to get to know myself very well... Anyway, I like the passion in this poem I give it a 4.7 on the Nortiscale.


Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by rockshv on Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 05:26:02 AM AEST
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aww this is heartbreaking, im sure you are a great guy!! and if whoever your with cant see that then she doesnt deserve u!!! u need someone who will love u unconditionally and respect u!!!
she will come yr way!!!

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