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Tears
Contributed by
blueheart
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Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 09:57:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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These tears,
Flowing tears of pain,
Flowing tears of shame.
Every drop,
Softly spilling down,
Dissolved with sadness, apathy.
Collecting beneath your tired eyelids,
Dripping one by one,
Like the cracks forming in your heart.
Tears,
Does it melt your strife,
Or break your pride?
These tears,
Provides comfort,
Soothing the battered soul.
Tears.
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blueheart
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2003-10-21 09:57:48] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 12:16:43 AM AEST (User
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My tears only sting the wounds....a beautiful write me dearr friend. Thank you for all your comments on my writes.It is for people like you that I write. :o)
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Re: Tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ronald on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 01:15:57 AM AEST (User
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Well although I'm a guy, I feel tears really bring comfort. it releases your grief. Besides that, tears are good. it protects your eyes from bacteria and maybe viruses because tears have enzymes that kills them. Well, that's what I gathers from Biology. Anyway, glad you have a new poem here and keep your poems coming...
Yours sincerely,
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Re: Tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by carebear on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 08:41:54 PM AEST (User
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My tears are either of saddness,joy,pain or many other things this however a very nice poem..
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Re: Tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by afraid_of_fear on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 10:24:33 AM AEST (User
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hey, i havent read much of your poetry for a while but this has set in my mind to read more.. it's fascinating and i love it!
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: Tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by silent on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 09:38:12 AM AEST (User
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I love the second verse, tears can be a great outlet and bring relief, don't know about comfort though. Have to ponder on it more, nice.
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Re: Tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 08:12:52 PM AEST (User
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My tears bring relief from being stressed. Very good write here. You've expressed it so well. *S* Cynthia |
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