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The ally
Contributed by
loopylou
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Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 07:26:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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i leave the hustleof the maine road
leaving its saftey and light
as i begin my walk down the ally in the dead of night
i look down into the pitch dark
their is a safer way of doing this i should of followed the road but i dont want to be late home
i could risk my curfew or my life
i risk my life
i run down the first half of the ally worrying who could be listening to my heavy pants
running in this darkness
so scarred
in search of light
i swear ill leave earleir ill never do this again
i see the street light i pause underneath it
i look over my shoulder into this unknown darkness
not looking to long
once a long time ago i9 saw a grey ghostly figure here gliding
with that thought
i have a polsation to run
an erge
i run from the darkness behind me to the darkness in front
the second part of the ally
i run withn a new leval of energy
i never thought possible
i fear the echos pof my own leaps
i reach the end of the ally hardly breathing
walking down the streetv i breath fresh air
it makes my blood flow with greatfull relife
i get my breath back
then start the next ally
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loopylou
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2003-10-21 07:26:27]
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Re: The ally
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2003 @ 12:56:38 PM AEST
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Daggone it! In this day and age you can never walk home alone! The experience is riveting and your poem is exasperating.
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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