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[aid] => mick
[title] => Suicide
[time] => 2003-10-20 20:46:09
[hometext] => "I think everyone should read this poem, it could be about anyone, or how anyone's feeling, this world is chaotic and sometimes you just feel like giving up. This poem is not to condone it but to acknowledge it."
[bodytext] => Sometime I wonder does it hurt to die? I know I hurt because everynight I cry. Sometimes I wish time could just stop or fly by, it would at least leaves me with the feeling of once being alive. Do you think if I killed myself Heaven would take me? Or would I go to Hell live with Satan and he'll embrac me? Crazy lies I'm feeling despised but why do I want to hate? Is it because at that strange moment I felt alive or I just came in to late. People are so cruel to one another when you have friends that aren't true and your mother doesn't love you. I think I'm going to go now before this poem starts to laps, but I'll write another, then slash my wrist and die before I colapse.
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Suicide
Contributed by
Modest
on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 08:46:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Sometime I wonder does it hurt to die? I know I hurt because everynight I cry. Sometimes I wish time could just stop or fly by, it would at least leaves me with the feeling of once being alive. Do you think if I killed myself Heaven would take me? Or would I go to Hell live with Satan and he'll embrac me? Crazy lies I'm feeling despised but why do I want to hate? Is it because at that strange moment I felt alive or I just came in to late. People are so cruel to one another when you have friends that aren't true and your mother doesn't love you. I think I'm going to go now before this poem starts to laps, but I'll write another, then slash my wrist and die before I colapse.
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Re: Suicide
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 09:02:56 PM AEST
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And this is so very sad that they think they are alone and that a simple thought of another day's breath cannot save them ,for to breathe is such agony when it only seems to prolong the darkness.
This is a very true write!!
I sincerely hope that those those who think these ones to be weak..change their minds and not judge one way or another,just be there and let them know that EVERYONE is special and has a place in this world. |
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Re: Suicide
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 09:12:34 PM AEST
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| Your poem sent chills down my spine,cause I've had these thoughts in my mind.I've even tried to die,to commit suicide.It hurts to want to live so much,but not be able to or to not feel alive.Your poem is a relief to me, and never give up on something you are so good at. |
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