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the sky slightly dark.
Bright blue eyes of
wisdom so new.

The light scent of powder
on the breath of mystery.
A promise full of secrets
with a future still in view.

Tears falling quickly now,
everything so very dark.
Bright eyes' light lost forever
this pain so very new.

The lost sense of mystery
a shattered future in two. [comments] => 9 [counter] => 222 [topic] => 48 [informant] => jaeann [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Whispered Moment

Contributed by jaeann on Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 07:45:20 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

The rain gently falling,
the sky slightly dark.
Bright blue eyes of
wisdom so new.

The light scent of powder
on the breath of mystery.
A promise full of secrets
with a future still in view.

Tears falling quickly now,
everything so very dark.
Bright eyes' light lost forever
this pain so very new.

The lost sense of mystery
a shattered future in two.

Copyright © jaeann ... [ 2003-10-20 19:45:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Whispered Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 07:47:31 PM AEST
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ok investing in Klenex now...tears flowing...strong write...rips at the heart
Shari

Re: Whispered Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 07:55:29 PM AEST
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Very touching.....
Jenni

Re: Whispered Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 07:56:56 PM AEST
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What is this today??..everyone wants a piece of me lol..This is soooo emotional ripping...I love it !!
*
Sharon...
Pass me the kleenex please Shari*

Re: Whispered Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 07:58:01 PM AEST
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Very heartfelt...nicely expressed!
Saira

Re: Whispered Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by cheetham on Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 08:43:52 PM AEST
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Great poem!! emotionally involving and pulls on the heart strings lol, what more could you want?? well done!

Re: Whispered Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by PoeticReign on Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 09:51:21 PM AEST
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very powerful indeed... nicely written ... "the breath of mystery" I love it!
~Nikki

Re: Whispered Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 03:59:55 AM AEST
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Oh Jaymee how sad, how futile this write.
Nothing in this world or another could ever make it right.
Remember forever that day, it will never go away,
Nor the feeling so new...to ever renew, but you will adjust, dear, because you have to. We all do! With tears, mystery, and future's due!
I wish I could hug you!
lovingcritters
ConSue

Re: Whispered Moment (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 06:33:41 PM AEST
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my passion is this style, a lifetime in a few words. great read, Crow

Re: Whispered Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by POOBEAR on Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 08:15:39 PM AEST
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Hi Jaeann,
I have to agree with everyone else
on this beautiful write. I too felt the tears
streaming down my face.Please take
care of yourself and if I could give you
a hug I surely would.
much love
Lynn

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