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Gave birth to darkness.
Sorrows emerged from its womb so barren,
With all their cruelness.

Shattered dreams lacerated her eyes,
Gave crimson tears way to flow dry,
Spread their bruised wings, soared high,
In complete turmoil, into the ashen sky.

Fingers so benumbed to kindle any light,
In this another desolate moonless night.
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Buried Candles

Contributed by Saira on Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 06:51:10 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Sun died in the lap of horizon,
Gave birth to darkness.
Sorrows emerged from its womb so barren,
With all their cruelness.

Shattered dreams lacerated her eyes,
Gave crimson tears way to flow dry,
Spread their bruised wings, soared high,
In complete turmoil, into the ashen sky.

Fingers so benumbed to kindle any light,
In this another desolate moonless night.

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Re: Buried Candles (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 06:59:36 PM AEST
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very moving
Shari

Re: Buried Candles (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 07:36:45 PM AEST
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wow o wow.....so dark and very well expressed..I love the imagery
Today,I can relate :)

Re: Buried Candles (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 08:28:44 PM AEST
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breathtaking...............

Re: Buried Candles (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 01:41:30 AM AEST
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Aaah, very strong, and powerful lines..depth of emotion endless.."Shattered dreams lacerated her eyes, Gave crimson tears way to flow dry, Spread their bruised wings, soared high, In complete turmoil, into the ashen sky.".. great.. venkat

Re: Buried Candles (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 04:05:54 AM AEST
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Oh Siara, and amazing write.
I felt the sadness, the emptiness clear to the bottom of my toes.
As I was reading my heart froze, in the middle of the moonless night.
Numbed by the loss of light!
I hate darkness, so this poem was really chilly for me.Well done!
Wonderful dark poetry.
Love you dear friend,
Connie Sue

Re: Buried Candles (User Rating: 1 )
by kalika_vidya on Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 06:58:40 AM AEST
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wonderful write.. great talent. K

Re: Buried Candles (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 02:36:11 PM AEST
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Wow! You did exceptionally well on the imagery here! I love the aura that this darkness emits,yet lulls me into a night of wonder! Great job!
Angel always...godspeed...joni

Re: Buried Candles (User Rating: 1 )
by Zee on Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 04:25:33 PM AEST
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Once again an amazing exhibit of striking imagery! You are always at the best on your hand!! Great write!!

Zee

Re: Buried Candles (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 06:36:40 PM AEST
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this is outstanding! great job. Crow

Re: Buried Candles (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 22nd October 2003 @ 08:49:05 PM AEST
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"shattered dreams lacerated her eyes..." "fingers so benumbed to kindle any light.." simply exquisite play of words; the mood kind of remind me of "wuthering heights", the same gloomy darkness seems to engulf. ---kj (Another Crab)

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