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Array ( [sid] => 25304 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Repetition [time] => 2003-10-18 23:56:08 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Rain must fall
in the after all
silent within your skull and look away
wont bring another day
wont bring another day

wind must blow
and you will go
moving real slow across the sand
bringing a plague across the land
bringing a plague upon the land



For what you fear is the one who will bring you down
and its a sad thing to see you living underground
no you wont catch me being something im not
stunned when you found out that you skin only meant to rought

storms must rage
then I turn the page
in this maze you'll be amazed
since it cant be fazed
since its never fazed

frost must freeze
and your on your knees
and your begging please not me this time
It wont be fine
no it wont be fine

generating strength from the ones you are hating
generating strength and anialating

For what you fear is the one who will bring you down
and its a sad thing to see you living underground
no you wont catch me being something im not
stunned when you found out that you skin only meant to rought

darkness must fall
silently crushing one and all
cant hear you as you call out my name
can I find another plane
can I find another plane

shadows must lurke
but you cant make it work
grabbed you but you jerked away from me
what will it take to make you see
what will it take to make you see

generating strength from the ones you are hating
generating strength and anialating

For what you fear is the one who will bring you down
and its a sad thing to see you living underground
no you wont catch me being something im not
stunned when you found out that you skin only meant to rought

Repetition
repetition is the mision
repetition
so unreliable... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Rawjer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Repetition

Contributed by Rawjer on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 11:56:08 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Rain must fall
in the after all
silent within your skull and look away
wont bring another day
wont bring another day

wind must blow
and you will go
moving real slow across the sand
bringing a plague across the land
bringing a plague upon the land



For what you fear is the one who will bring you down
and its a sad thing to see you living underground
no you wont catch me being something im not
stunned when you found out that you skin only meant to rought

storms must rage
then I turn the page
in this maze you'll be amazed
since it cant be fazed
since its never fazed

frost must freeze
and your on your knees
and your begging please not me this time
It wont be fine
no it wont be fine

generating strength from the ones you are hating
generating strength and anialating

For what you fear is the one who will bring you down
and its a sad thing to see you living underground
no you wont catch me being something im not
stunned when you found out that you skin only meant to rought

darkness must fall
silently crushing one and all
cant hear you as you call out my name
can I find another plane
can I find another plane

shadows must lurke
but you cant make it work
grabbed you but you jerked away from me
what will it take to make you see
what will it take to make you see

generating strength from the ones you are hating
generating strength and anialating

For what you fear is the one who will bring you down
and its a sad thing to see you living underground
no you wont catch me being something im not
stunned when you found out that you skin only meant to rought

Repetition
repetition is the mision
repetition
so unreliable...




Copyright © Rawjer ... [ 2003-10-18 23:56:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Repetition (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 03:51:13 PM AEST
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repetition is a great way to grab a reader's attention, and this poem was swimming with repitition. So I could easily find what you were trying to say.

Great write!
Love Joy and Peace,
Jellybellyprincess


Re: Repetition (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 03:54:34 PM AEST
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Oh yeah, and I forgot to add- this reminded me so much of a song Shakespeare wrote. It's in "Twelfth Night". You should read it. If you don't read the play, atleast read the song, it's a beautiful, sad song. I'm not sure where in the book it is, but it starts out "Come away come away death, and in sad cypress let me be laid". I'm thinking you'd enjoy it =)

Peace,
JBP


Re: Repetition (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 10:55:55 PM AEST
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Hey, this is some good *****. I like your work. Great piece.


Re: Repetition (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 10:52:28 PM AEST
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i love this one.......it keeps making me want to read it over and over.......really great write!!!!




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