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A picture with a twist,
I'll draw it with a razor blade,
I'll draw it on my wrist,
And as I draw this picture,
A fountain will appear,
And as this fountain flows,
My troubles dissapear.

I find it kind of funny,
I find it kind of sad,
Cause the dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. [comments] => 10 [counter] => 269 [topic] => 39 [informant] => eviltinkerbell25 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

The Bloody Picture

Contributed by eviltinkerbell25 on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 10:53:35 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Im gonna draw a picture,
A picture with a twist,
I'll draw it with a razor blade,
I'll draw it on my wrist,
And as I draw this picture,
A fountain will appear,
And as this fountain flows,
My troubles dissapear.

I find it kind of funny,
I find it kind of sad,
Cause the dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had.

Copyright © eviltinkerbell25 ... [ 2003-10-18 22:53:35]
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Re: The Bloody Picture (User Rating: 1 )
by stephierose on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 11:05:55 PM AEST
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This poem is soo deep, It was soo sad, yet beautiful at the same time, I really respect you for posting this.. it is sadly beautiful
Stephanie

Re: The Bloody Picture (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 11:26:39 PM AEST
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Excellent write ... Jan

Re: The Bloody Picture (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 12:20:44 AM AEST
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great write, i look forward to more of your poetry, warm welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: The Bloody Picture (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 01:32:20 AM AEST
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Awesome poem..... don't ever give in to your thoughts...keep writing the pain will some day subside. Truly wonderful poem!

Re: The Bloody Picture (User Rating: 1 )
by Cancer on Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 03:24:54 AM AEST
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very powerful. bleeding with dark beauty. in such a short write, a lifetime of agony is painted. esp. loved the last stanza. great write.

51

Re: The Bloody Picture (User Rating: 1 )
by EternitysLyre on Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 10:23:44 AM AEST
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Damn that's good. I'm not sure rhythm impresses others as much as it catches my eye, but by my standards, this is a masterpeice. Simple, yet profound; Dark, yet sound. Keep it up.

Re: The Bloody Picture (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 03:38:52 PM AEST
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The first stanza I've seen before its a quote from somewhere, but if it describes you thats cool just say thats its not your own work.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: The Bloody Picture (User Rating: 1 )
by mercedes on Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 10:02:31 AM AEST
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Had i not been following someones comments, i would of never read this poem. Im glad I did, i loved it. So sad and dark.

Re: The Bloody Picture (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 06:20:21 PM AEST
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This is an awsome poem and I can realy relate cause i have been there!! Keep on writting cause i will keep on reading!

Re: The Bloody Picture (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 08:25:20 AM AEST
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Mad World, huh? Interesting.

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