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black leather clinched to her body
the strapping of her knee high boots coming loose
her long black hair as beautiful
as night consuming day
those clear blue eyes stare into you
cant move,
frozen in a moonlight gaze
she moves closer like a beast for its prey
now breast to breast
her soft hands brush against yours
soft lips press against eachother
warm breath upon your neck
and she whispers and asks
would you like another taste
dark clouds roll in
and purple flashes invade the moonlight sky
as the rain falls off of two bodies
now intertwined
the steam rises and fog settles in
as these two souls now commit
a beautiful sin. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 240 [topic] => 30 [informant] => exiled [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => PoemsonBeauty )

Beautiful Sin

Contributed by exiled on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 09:46:44 PM in AEST
Topic: PoemsonBeauty

(beautiful sin)

black leather clinched to her body
the strapping of her knee high boots coming loose
her long black hair as beautiful
as night consuming day
those clear blue eyes stare into you
cant move,
frozen in a moonlight gaze
she moves closer like a beast for its prey
now breast to breast
her soft hands brush against yours
soft lips press against eachother
warm breath upon your neck
and she whispers and asks
would you like another taste
dark clouds roll in
and purple flashes invade the moonlight sky
as the rain falls off of two bodies
now intertwined
the steam rises and fog settles in
as these two souls now commit
a beautiful sin.

Copyright © exiled ... [ 2003-10-18 21:46:44]
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Re: Beautiful Sin (User Rating: 1 )
by fallensilence on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 10:53:10 PM AEST
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you did a great job of describing everrything to put a clear picture in the readers head. great poem .
david

Re: Beautiful Sin (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 12:09:43 AM AEST
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this poem is breathtaking sam *sigh..........* hugs n' love nessa

Re: Beautiful Sin (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 08:32:03 PM AEST
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sensual, erotic and with beautiful imagery. a great write, Kate x

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