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Array ( [sid] => 25287 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tearing from the Inside [time] => 2003-10-18 19:18:23 [hometext] => *Lol Psychotic poems how great! Well the disembodied head was mine. The triad I refer to is weed, effexor, and ativan. I thought I might die, but I guess i need to lace it with more effexor and ativan.* [bodytext] => Giving birth to this depression
Which slumbers deep within
A silent tear slips downward
As these unfufilling years slip away

I see a disembodied head
Entombed in a triad of ropes and bondage
Mouth frozen in a final, agonized scream

A black streak, streaks across the sky
Across the tear-smudged sky
It plummets downward and captures my worn attention
Yet horrifying me with its brilliance and brevity
I dwell on this for close to infinity
Stunned by the clarity of my thoughts
And the revelations that seep
From my agony-fraught mind

I scream and no one hears my pleas
My skin tears and blood breaks
Upon the tiled floor, but no one pays heed
I tear from the inside, unable to focus

Eyes still twitch from the shock of separation
Parted by fate, separated by destiny
Now blind to the ones that corrupt [comments] => 12 [counter] => 399 [topic] => 59 [informant] => bobotheclown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )
Tearing from the Inside

Contributed by bobotheclown on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 07:18:23 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems



Giving birth to this depression
Which slumbers deep within
A silent tear slips downward
As these unfufilling years slip away

I see a disembodied head
Entombed in a triad of ropes and bondage
Mouth frozen in a final, agonized scream

A black streak, streaks across the sky
Across the tear-smudged sky
It plummets downward and captures my worn attention
Yet horrifying me with its brilliance and brevity
I dwell on this for close to infinity
Stunned by the clarity of my thoughts
And the revelations that seep
From my agony-fraught mind

I scream and no one hears my pleas
My skin tears and blood breaks
Upon the tiled floor, but no one pays heed
I tear from the inside, unable to focus

Eyes still twitch from the shock of separation
Parted by fate, separated by destiny
Now blind to the ones that corrupt




Copyright © bobotheclown ... [ 2003-10-18 19:18:23]
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Re: Tearing from the Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by PoeticReign on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 07:29:48 PM AEST
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dude... this rocks! i can feel it! my favorite lines are the first 2 and the last 3.
~Nikki


Re: Tearing from the Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 07:35:33 PM AEST
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do you mind>??? I was eating LOL!!
This is ewww....but I like I like*huge smiles*


Re: Tearing from the Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 08:51:39 PM AEST
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wow this is great!!
michelle


Re: Tearing from the Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by exiled on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 09:57:04 PM AEST
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Bobo you never fail to amaze me. lol. i really like this it cuts deep.


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Re: Tearing from the Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 08:54:47 AM AEST
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Ohhh yes...this does cut deep, very deep. Amazing imagery here, I liked this one a lot


Re: Tearing from the Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Rawkergurl2003 on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 02:34:45 AM AEST
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awesome write..love the last three lines. thanx for sharing
rawkergurl


Re: Tearing from the Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 10:01:52 AM AEST
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I must have missed this one.. caught sight of it as the most read psychotic poem.. and i understand why, i'm in complete awe..
charxx


Re: Tearing from the Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 05:22:42 PM AEST
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this is incredible joel...wow...the last three lines are just amazing...


Re: Tearing from the Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by corrupted_minds on Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 05:12:20 AM AEST
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love the work


Re: Tearing from the Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by SAT on Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 02:28:33 PM AEST
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i absolutely adored it!!!!! LOVE YOUR WORK!


Re: Tearing from the Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by movax on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 11:42:47 AM AEST
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Man this is great. Give the poet an award!


Re: Tearing from the Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by MrMojoRisin on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 11:16:09 PM AEST
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Wow, i read it once and loved it. Just recently read it while in a stupor from booze and prescription painkillers, and it was all the better. It made sense, just appeared in front of me. Love it.




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