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( but there’s nothing I can do )
One of my demons has escaped
And it’s coming after YOU!!

It’s one of the little furry ones
( with red scales underneath )
You know – the one with long sharp claws
And little razor teeth.

It’s the female I’m afraid
( the one that YOU created )
and though it was really made for me
It’s YOU she always hated.

Poetic justice – don’t you think?
( for without your vicious spite )
the demon she – would never be
And wouldn’t be loose tonight.

Now – in truth – it makes me glad
( and I wish that I could see )
my demon rip you limb from limb
for what you did to me.

Now I’m truly happy
( and soon YOU will be dead )
I hope my demon eats your heart
And brings me back your head !!!!!
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Poetic Justice

Contributed by Coquillion on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 04:24:43 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I am truly sorry.
( but there’s nothing I can do )
One of my demons has escaped
And it’s coming after YOU!!

It’s one of the little furry ones
( with red scales underneath )
You know – the one with long sharp claws
And little razor teeth.

It’s the female I’m afraid
( the one that YOU created )
and though it was really made for me
It’s YOU she always hated.

Poetic justice – don’t you think?
( for without your vicious spite )
the demon she – would never be
And wouldn’t be loose tonight.

Now – in truth – it makes me glad
( and I wish that I could see )
my demon rip you limb from limb
for what you did to me.

Now I’m truly happy
( and soon YOU will be dead )
I hope my demon eats your heart
And brings me back your head !!!!!

Copyright Â© Coquillion ... [ 2003-10-18 04:24:43]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Poetic Justice (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 06:25:10 AM AEST
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i really like this, its something i should of wrote about my recent ex, im going to submit something i wrote about him soon, you might like it...

broken skin x
(gem)

Re: Poetic Justice (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 12:03:55 PM AEST
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This is such a fantastic poem!! There were bits in it that made me chuckle and there were bits that I could really relate to!

A truly awesome write!!

sleepless_siren

Re: Poetic Justice (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 05:12:07 PM AEST
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Wow... such hatred ... but extremely well written - love the metaphors ... Jan

Re: Poetic Justice (User Rating: 1 )
by TheWildBeliever on Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 02:36:34 AM AEST
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such a disturbing poem........ its good though

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