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Array ( [sid] => 25259 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Final Sting [time] => 2003-10-18 04:11:06 [hometext] => I've had enough.................. [bodytext] => Walls closing in,
Blades slashing down,
A mother who doesnt want you around,
This is the world I seek to escape.

It doesnt matter what I take,
Couple blues, a few reds,
Just as long as it makes me dead,
That's all that matters in the end.

Too many people,
All demanding too much,
Have I mentioned that this life sucks,
All this effort is getting old.

Too many needles,
Too many pills,
I say I've had my fill,
The time has come to end this.

My last cut,
The final sting,
My life, I'm ending,
Goddess guide me to a better place. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 222 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Kalika [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

The Final Sting

Contributed by Kalika on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 04:11:06 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Walls closing in,
Blades slashing down,
A mother who doesnt want you around,
This is the world I seek to escape.

It doesnt matter what I take,
Couple blues, a few reds,
Just as long as it makes me dead,
That's all that matters in the end.

Too many people,
All demanding too much,
Have I mentioned that this life sucks,
All this effort is getting old.

Too many needles,
Too many pills,
I say I've had my fill,
The time has come to end this.

My last cut,
The final sting,
My life, I'm ending,
Goddess guide me to a better place.

Copyright © Kalika ... [ 2003-10-18 04:11:06]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Final Sting (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 04:13:18 AM AEST
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Kal this so painful... tears. Hang in there... Such a beautiful poem!

Re: The Final Sting (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 12:05:26 PM AEST
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Wow! This is such a powerful poem. It was incredible. I hope you feel better soon.

sleepless_siren

Re: The Final Sting (User Rating: 1 )
by resurrection on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 12:36:42 PM AEST
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Really strong expressions. Stay strong and I hope you feel better soon. -res-

Re: The Final Sting (User Rating: 1 )
by stephierose on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 04:23:08 PM AEST
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I can relate to everything that you're feeling, I thought your poem was sadly beautiful, if you ever need to talk .. im here
Stephanie

Re: The Final Sting (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 06:33:58 PM AEST
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Things won't stay the same forever. I know it seems like it, but trust me, it won't always be that way. Whether you simply start feeling better, or find a way to remove yourself from that situation (and put yourself in a better one). Trust in the Goddess that she will take you where you need to be, and won't give you any more than she knows you can handle. You're in this situation for a reason, and someday down the road that reason will ring clear as a bell, and maybe you'll even be thankful for it. The Goddess loves you. She knows what she's doing. :)

Blessed be,

~ Moonlit

Re: The Final Sting (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 03:04:31 AM AEST
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I could very well lose sleep after reading this.Im very concerned (((hugs))) But I wont coz Im wanting to believe you will stay strong to see another day..another struggle maybe but another day with us here:)
Please take care @->-->---
loving_whispers2003@yahoo.com
sp1r1t_dancer@hotmail.com

Re: The Final Sting (User Rating: 1 )
by Coquillion on Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 04:44:14 PM AEST
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A beautiful poem - Don't give up - I'd miss your poetry

Re: The Final Sting (User Rating: 1 )
by AlurTemptation on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 12:43:44 AM AEST
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That was brilliant... It reminds me of my life. Keep up the writting. And nah, I mean people may have been through the same thing but no one could ever fuly understand another ones pain.

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