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Array ( [sid] => 25253 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Silent Mourning [time] => 2003-10-18 01:06:20 [hometext] => Back to the older writing style...dreams,imagination,writing to maybe give some sense of relation to someone :) [bodytext] =>
I'm still here where you left me,by the window on this chair
I look to where we used to sleep,now only memories lie there
So silent is the afternoon,my mornings fail to shine
And in the evening's presence,I recall you in my mind

Day breaks with such sorrow,as I turn to the empty space
And In my heart I know,you're a love I cant replace
Upon the satin pillows,only remnants of your whispers
All around is solitude and I grieve with fading pictures

My time is spent alone,wandering through each breath
Mourning for our love,that dies a lonely death
Not feeling so at home here,without you,it's not the same
Remembering the taste of your lips,as they gently spoke my name

If I could stop these tears from falling,if for only but a while
Then maybe I could think of you,and remember with a smile
But the heart must take its time,when love is felt so true
You cannot rush the mourning,no matter what you do

I'm still here where you left me,by the window on this chair
I look to where we used to sleep,now only memories lie there
So silent is the afternoon,my mornings fail to shine
As I look upon the love we had,and hold this heart of mine



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Silent Mourning

Contributed by LovingWhispers on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 01:06:20 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered




I'm still here where you left me,by the window on this chair
I look to where we used to sleep,now only memories lie there
So silent is the afternoon,my mornings fail to shine
And in the evening's presence,I recall you in my mind

Day breaks with such sorrow,as I turn to the empty space
And In my heart I know,you're a love I cant replace
Upon the satin pillows,only remnants of your whispers
All around is solitude and I grieve with fading pictures

My time is spent alone,wandering through each breath
Mourning for our love,that dies a lonely death
Not feeling so at home here,without you,it's not the same
Remembering the taste of your lips,as they gently spoke my name

If I could stop these tears from falling,if for only but a while
Then maybe I could think of you,and remember with a smile
But the heart must take its time,when love is felt so true
You cannot rush the mourning,no matter what you do

I'm still here where you left me,by the window on this chair
I look to where we used to sleep,now only memories lie there
So silent is the afternoon,my mornings fail to shine
As I look upon the love we had,and hold this heart of mine







Copyright © LovingWhispers ... [ 2003-10-18 01:06:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Silent Mourning (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 01:14:45 AM AEST
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absolutely beautiful poem, perfect title, lovely picture setting the mood, wish i could send sunshine into your heart though my dear frend, big hugs n' lotsa love, nessa


Re: Silent Mourning (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 01:40:32 AM AEST
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So sad, but so beautifully written...
Hugs
Jenni


Re: Silent Mourning (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 01:55:16 AM AEST
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very beautiful..venkat


Re: Silent Mourning (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 01:59:12 AM AEST
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Awesome..... tender words..... beautiful picture......Great poem. Speechless.


Re: Silent Mourning (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 03:32:42 AM AEST
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a biitersweet lovely poem
Shari


Re: Silent Mourning (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 03:50:44 AM AEST
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Beautiful and poignant I wish I had some of your talent its not fair that one person should have so much. Lol great write.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Silent Mourning (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 12:08:53 PM AEST
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Totally beautiful ... I cried as I read this ... it moved me so deeply as I do this so often :(( Jan


Re: Silent Mourning (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 18th October 2003 @ 04:40:39 PM AEST
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i like this poetry, it really stirs me up, and I think it is the most beautiful style. super work. Crow


Re: Silent Mourning (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 09:00:42 PM AEST
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Oh the talent that is you..this is so perfect. Anything you put a pen to turns out a work of art :o).

Roses


Re: Silent Mourning (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 08:57:46 AM AEST
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No matter what style you are writing...it is still absolutely amazing. Your poetry touches, amazes, inspires and captivates me. An excellent, yet sad poem, I loved this one a lot.
-hugzies- stacey




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